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on The Evil That Men Do, Chapter 21
Jul 18, 22:41
I can only speak for one JS reader — me, of course — but I didn’t or don’t come to JS for stroke stories. I can find that anywhere on the interwebs. What drew me here was well-crafted and well-written sapphic erotica that pushed and often blew right past societal boundaries. I don’t NEED to read about tongues sliding across if I can also read about the emotions the owners of said tongues and clitorises are feeling in the process. I’m going to yet again refer back to Chapter 15 of Strange Brew and this paragraph in particular: “I think it’s hot,” she said, looking directly across the room and into her sister’s eyes. “I think you’re really sexy, sis. I think all the rules about who is supposed to feel what about whom are dumb. I think all the rules about who can do what with whom are dumb. If it wasn’t for those stupid rules, I’d kiss you right now.” If Chapter 16 had simply faded to black and the physical encounter that resulted from that exchange had taken place off screen, I wouldn’t have minded one bit, because the emotional buildup to it was so damn erotic. Please do not let the ever daunting task of creating a good sex scene be the only thing that deters you from sharing your work here. NOBODY who has published anything at JS can match your ability to bring to life complicated sexual relationships between women and girls across age gaps and family dynamics. And, of course, build a compelling story around those relationships. If you decide to hang up your keyboard when Evil concludes, know that your JS trilogy will never be matched or surpassed. And if you decide you have another one in you, I will be prepared to gobble it up like Nettie did with Halee’s… Excuse me. I’ll be in my bunk…
on Is This About Sex, Mom?
Jul 18, 12:33
Hey Jetboy, Glad JS went with option #2. It’s always great to read a hard to find classic amongst all the great new stuff here at JS. Everyone connected with JS does such a superb job in writing and editing which makes all the stories here super. Keep up with your high standards to keep JS the best around. I have not found any place better, which is why I keep coming back.
Jul 18, 12:01
Rachel, please don’t give up. You write so well and your stories flow so nicely. Would hate to see you stop writing because of the sex scene writing difficulties.I have followed you since the start of Pages from a Diary and I think you are in the same class of writing as Naughty Mommy. I think both of you are some the best writers on JS, so keep up the great work. Also you shouldn’t feel bad if you can’t come up different ways to describe Lesbian sex scenes. I don’t think your readers would mind if your descriptions repeated themselves from time to time and here and there. From what I have seen and read, all authors repeat themselves in different forms many times from one story to the next.
on The Evil That Men Do, Chapter 21
Jul 18, 11:23
Hey No One… I get it, although I do like to think my stories are worth it! Perhaps something to savor in the moment, as opposed to something you have to slog through to catch up with the narrative. As for the “next one”… dunno yet. Writing erotica is getting harder for me. When I started writing Pages From a Diary my intent was to have a slow build-up to a story that would ultimately just consist of a lot of sex, and wound up writing the story of a young girl finding herself, with sex as only one aspect of that. The verdict: I’m functionally incapable of writing a straight-up stroke story, and I no longer even want to. More than that, I find sex scenes brutally difficult to write, and feel like I’ve run out of ways to describe a tongue sliding across a clitoris. In the non-sexual parts of my writing, there are sometimes whole chapters in which JetBoy offers little more than a suggestion or two per paragraph. On the sex scenes it’s a sea of red, and I accept most of the changes. So I don’t know. There may not be a next one. Look at it this way: the chapter above took me probably a few hours to write. The foursome sex scene a few chapters ago? It took a week, and then JetBoy and I edited the living shit out of it. Sex scenes are getting harder for me, not easier. Also, I’m very aware that what I’m serving up is NOT what most readers come to JS for. So at this point I just don’t know.
on Flutterby
Jul 18, 09:10
A very lovely story, making you want to do naughty things by yourself. Wonder if they met again.
on Secrets, Chapter 25
Jul 17, 04:41
I have come to love Naughty Mommys stories. I would like to know if they are still writing and on what platform.i would love to continue to read their more recent stories.
on The Evil That Men Do, Chapter 21
Jul 17, 01:55
Hello. 🙂 Apologies for never commenting on your stories (they seem well-liked!) but… I guess I missed the train at the beginning, and it’s become rather daunting to catch up on dozens of chapters across multiple related stories. The perils of writing sequels, I suppose. Any chance for a fresh start for the next one? 🙂
Jul 16, 22:04
Make sure you have dry underwear before you dive into Strange Brew and I would advise forgoing underwear altogether before reading chapters 15 and 16. Trust me on this.
Jul 16, 18:37
C’mon now, you don’t think I’m gonna hand out spoilers, do you? 😁 Where Julie and Mallory are concerned, I dunno. My partner and I are in our late 30s, and we still carry on like that. As for the sleepover… well… it isn’t over!
Jul 16, 18:30
Hi,Nina,and welcome. First off, thanks for the lovely compliments. Second, never hesitate to comment! I love getting comments. Finally, this story is the sequel to my two previous efforts, Pages From a Diary and Strange Brew. Pages comes first, so if you want the whole saga, start there. Thanks again for chiming in!
on Flutterby
Jul 16, 17:51
Thank you Lemonpie! And Brian I agree, this is now in my top 5 just increase
on The Evil That Men Do, Chapter 21
Jul 16, 16:45
And you for sure should read Strange Brew. If you’re liking this story I think you’ll enjoy Strange Brew
Jul 16, 16:17
I can assure you that authors don’t find comments annoying at all! It’s the only “reward” we get for all the effort put into a story. Feel free to post as much as you like.
on The Evil That Men Do, Chapter 21
Jul 16, 14:31
Will Trinity be involved in future chapters .This leaving the girls on there own intrigues me somehow. I love how Julie and Mallory banter between them it feels like there sixteen then there ages now.The sleepover will be thrilling and the O’s they will be having.Another wonderful chapter Rach
on The Evil That Men Do, Chapter 21
Jul 16, 05:15
Rachael … been playing catch-up (new-er to the site) and waiting for the right moment to add a comment. While many of your chapters are erotically hot or full of suspense, this one is so exciting in waiting for what will happen next. I noticed your comment above to about “sleepovers being FUN.” I could not agree more! I can just imagine those three girls, sitting around talking, flirting with each other, getting turned on, and wondering what might happen next. Of course, when Vicky broke the tension in the air by saying, “Right now, I’d really like to kiss Patty.” How many us have been on both ends of that? (raise hand) Even though you left a cliff-hanger, it’s a good one as it allows to let our imaginations wonder … if we were in their shoes. I won’t comment very often as I know sometimes that can be annoying (though I love seeing what other people think too). So, I won’t be a pest, but know that I’m following each of your chapters with bated breath and just a wee bit of wetness. I have a feeling I should check out the other story mentioned in here, “Strange Brew”? Thanks for a great chapter!
on Flutterby
Jul 15, 15:52
A very nice story. It reminded me of Allison at Disney by Little Allison. A favorite of mine. Thank you, this is so lovely.
on Scouting for Girls, Chapter 8
Jul 15, 11:33
quel dommage de ne pas avoir la suite l’auteur prend son temps on attend la suite avec les adultes mais que l’attente est longue une belle plume serais la bienvenue pour avancer dans cette histoire sais on jamais ? Google Translate: What a shame not to have the sequel! The author is taking their time; we’re waiting for the continuation with the adults, but the wait is so long. A beautiful writing style would be welcome to move this story forward. Who knows?
on The Loves and Labours of Doris Sloane, Chapter 15
Jul 15, 01:49
This story has been an incredible saga of Doris and the shaw family. My only regret is the obvious oppurtunity there was to continue the saga. For example Victoria’s parents could have been killed in any number of ways, leaving their estate to Victoria. Who in turn could have turned the estate into a boarding school for orphaned girls to be educated, hint, hint. Thank you for this wonderful story. I cannot believe I am the first person to comment on the story in 2026.
on May is Masturbation Month
Jul 14, 20:07
What a GREAT MONTH!! Mom caught me when I was 11 and said It was harmful. I might go blind…. till this day I can still see. Enjoy yourself every day if you wish
Jul 14, 18:23
Yes! I could see and almost feel the excitement growing
Jul 14, 14:47
Couldn’t help going back in time. this chapter, the previous chapter, and the next chapter, well just fantastic moments in this story.
Jul 13, 18:06
Hey, you! Where the vast majority of Def Leppard’s output is concerned I would agree with you; the only Lep records I spin on a regular basis are the first two, although I do have a great deal of respect for Pyromania as being a shining example of what it is. As regards the chapter, thanks! Where your suspicions are concerned, I’ll just say there’s more than one star to be found here, and nothing is entirely a side story.
on The Evil That Men Do, Chapter 21
Jul 13, 17:37
Yeah, Def Leppard just ain’t “it” for me. No hate, just not a fan. They struck me as a cross between AC/DC & KISS – and they were pushed HARD by the record label & radio stations. It all turned me off. As for this chapter, I’m a BIG fan. The sleepover scene was perfect as a set up for the next chapter (the cliffhanger ending really was the ultimate tease), and Vicky is quietly becoming the star of this installment in the series. The rural slice of life scene with “Julie & Mallory down on the farm” is interesting comfort food, but it makes me wonder where it fits with the larger storyline (I suspect there is more to that side-story than meets the eye). Overall, another brilliant chapter that left me wanting “more, now!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Jul 13, 10:47
@JR Kain: thank you! That sort of thing is fun to put right before a chapter break. And yes: with a total of forty-four chapters, the next one marks the halfway point. About another year’s worth of material at the present rate. @Emiliano: Thank you.
Jul 13, 05:56
I wasn’t sure you would ever be able to surpass Chapter 15 of Strange Brew on the erotic anticipation scale — “I think you’re really sexy, sis” were the hottest six words published at JS that don’t describe a sex scene — but this one edged it out and “Right now, I’d really like to kiss Patty” has taken the mantle as well. And we are just now at the halfway point! God have mercy on our souls as we approach the second half!!
Jul 12, 13:22
Ah, those evil, evil cliffhangers… god help me, I love ’em. As for Julie and Mallory, only Jetboy and I know where this is ultimately going (cue maniacal laugher), but I promise that all will be revealed in the fullness of time. Twenty-three chapters to go… the next installment marks the halfway point!
Jul 12, 12:51
Oh Rachel, again with the cliff hanger. I think we know that a movie, is Not, going to watched. interesting road with Mallory and Julie, could you be setting us up with their possible move back home. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Jul 12, 11:02
Good morning, all… @Kim & Sue: Thanks ladies. All I’m gonna say in response to you questions is that sleepovers are FUN… @MusicMan: It may seem like just being with the characters, but just you wait… As for music, I can’t help myself. I teach it for a living, and spend most of my non-working time either playing or listening to it. I probably talk about it more than I should. Glad it works for you! Thanks to both of you, and to anyone else who’s reading and enjoying it.
on I Was the Daughter of a Porn Star, Chapter 60
Jul 11, 00:16
YA!!!!!!!!!! PARTY TIME Cindy coming home
on The Evil That Men Do, Chapter 21
Jul 10, 21:33
Great chapter. Highly enjoyable time just being with characters we love and ones we are starting to know and love. And again I feel like I want the next chapter instantaneously. Lol. Also loved the music discussions in the chapter. Music discussion and listening is something that I think is an essential part of connecting to people.
Jul 10, 19:45
A nice chapter. Some alone time with Julie and Mal. Vicky and the sleepover. Will it continue with more true confessions and self discovery? Just what sort of movie might they pick out now? Or is something else in their near future? We look forward to finding out in the next chapter.
Jul 10, 15:32
Def Leppard is a hard band for me to talk about. Talk about profound greatness reversed to utter disappointment. Of course, that process is a bit retroactive… I was born the year Pour Some Sugar on Me skyrocketed to the top of the charts. Some would object to me even including them in discussions of the New Wave of British Heavy Metal. This is in part because of what the band would become, and in part because metalheads are put off by singer Joe Elliot’s douchey attitude about it. No, says Elliot with a maddening air of superiority, we were NEVER a metal band. Not even hard rock. We’re a glam band. Always have been. Sorry, Joe, not buying it. I have your first two albums. Def Lep hit the scene in 1980 with one of THE iconic debuts of the NWOBHM, the sprawling and somewhat decadent On Through the Night. Even then, you can see glimpses of what the band would become, most notably with the blatant commercial pandering of Hello America. That heinous track aside, it’s a wonderful record. The Leps would up the ante with their second album entitled High and Dry; significantly the first to be produced by Mutt Lange, who was riding high on the major success of his work with AC/DC. More focused, less self-indulgent, yet heavy and creative in a way that the band would never truly recapture. These two albums are absolute highlights of the NWOBHM, regardless of what a certain Mr. Elliot might have to say about it. And then there was Pyromania. The band’s commercial breakthrough, selling a tremendous six million copies within the first year or two. It was more of a triumph for Mutt Lange than the band, as he dominated the proceedings. Although it’s 1983 release technically places it within the timeline of the NWOBHM, clearly the Leps were no longer participating in that movement anymore. Pyromania has more in common with the burgeoning American hair metal scene, which would explode that year with the release of Quiet Riot’s seminal Metal Health. To be clear: I am NOT knocking Pyromania. To be sure, it’s the sort of pop-infused hard rock that would dominate MTV for the next seven years or so… but it’s one of the best albums of it’s kind. That said, one has to make mention of the firing of guitarist Pete Willis in the late stages of recording, and his replacement with Phil Collins. It’s my opinion that this had a profound impact on what was to come. It would be four long years until the follow-up, with various calamities befalling the band in the interim (not the least of which was drummer Rick Allen being deprived of an arm). The band recorded and scrapped two whole albums before settling on the finished product that was Hysteria. And now for my insane hot take: Hysteria is a patchy affair, not nearly as good as any of the three albums that came before. There is some wonderfully good music here (highlights include Gods of War and Don’t Shoot Shotgun), but there’s also abject garbage like Love Bites and the hip-hop plagued abortion of all things holy entitled Pour Some Sugar on Me. On the first two albums, Def Leppard was a full participant of the New Wave of British Heavy Metal. On Pyromania, they were a hard rock band with pop influences. On Hysteria, they’d morphed into a pop band with hard rock influences. Not a good transition from the perspective of Rachel. It would get worse. 1991’s Adrenalize would come on the heels of the death of guitarist Steve Clark, and was mostly just a watered down pop album. Even the harder-rockin’ stuff like Tear it Down suffered from such wimpy production it was impossible to love. There is exactly one highlight: the haunting White Lightning. And then it got better. The outtakes album Retroactive had a ton of good material on it (if you ignore a slew of truly hideous ballads), and 1996’s Slang, while a clear attempt to pander to the tastes of the no-fun 90s, was a surprisingly good record (can’t stand the title track, though). They followed it up with Euphoria, which was an attempt to recapture the sound and style of the Pyromania/Hysteria days. They pulled off the sound… but forgot about writing good songs. Which would characterize their entire history from that point; I don’t even remember how many albums have ensued since. I’ve heard them all; they all suck. Here’s my theory: between the firing of Pete Willis and the death of Steve Clark, the songwriting genius was entirely excised from the band. Losing Mutt Lange as a producer put the final nail in that coffin. The theme lyrics for this chapter are the first verse of Lady Strange, hailing from the Leps magnificent second album, High and Dry. It characterizes Vicky and Patty’s sudden, unexpected longing for each other, which is counter-balanced in this chapter by a little snippet of Julie and Mallory enjoying a late lunch together in the machine shed. A new attraction and an old romance, both hungrily alive… and both comprised of females who march to the beat of their own drums. Lady Strange, indeed.
on Aunt Lisa’s Summer with Jenny, Chapter 2
Jul 10, 12:22
So deliciously visual is this interaction between Lisa and Jenny. My c*** salutes you!
on Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter 6
Jul 10, 10:37
I can absolutely understand Sarah to some degree. Sometimes I wish I had never found the rabbit hole myself. And I absolutely wish I had never found “that” side of the web, just gas on the fire. However I really do love this story so far.
on Ripples, Chapter 46
Jul 10, 08:09
Thanks to all who left ratings and compliments. Readership is definitely down on this one, but that happens when you have a months-long break between chapters. Hell, I’m happy anyone is still reading this at all.
on Barbie Has Her Way, Part Two
Jul 9, 00:38
Just read this story, was glad Mom and her daughter got together, What I most enjoyed was how this pre teen girl control the older women, that is my fantasy to be controlled by some younger girl or girls
on Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter 6
Jul 8, 12:46
I love the story: it’s brilliantly written, challenging, and also genuinely funny and self-deprecating. The characters are believable, and in Sarah we have a central character who is aware of what she is doing, can’t stop herself, but admits how torn she is. The sex scenes are incredibly hot too. I’m really enjoying going down this rabbit hole and thank you to BlueJean for writing it. 👏👏
Jul 7, 16:44
Just read all 4 chapters, was totally amazing, hoping there might be more. I am a true die hard fan of Lesbian women, especially incest
Jul 7, 13:05
Thank you for saying. Oh, we’re not forcing ourselves. You have to not look away sometimes no matter how much you wish you could forget about it all. Like watching the news sometimes. We will be reading on despite covering our eyes at the same time while peeking through slightly spread fingers. We agree with Joe Dornish, and we’re sorry that oddly enough we are the ones not getting off to this anymore. We may save a comment for the end or maybe not. But we’ll shut up for the duration, as we don’t want to be the ones to harsh others enjoyment of the story. So I guess we’ll go look for Ms J. Jillenoffs nunnery where the nuns will educate us and discipline us as needed. Maybe we’ll head back to a Bee Keeper story to remember you by, even though this story is still welcome in a way just to read your always top notch writing. Despite our qualms we still gave a five heart rating. And sorry to have to correct you but we think it was Gandhi who said, “Shit’s gettin’ real.”
on Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter 6
Jul 7, 12:10
Kim & Sue™, you don’t owe me a comment, and I certainly don’t feel entitled to one. It makes me wince to think you’re forcing yourself to read on. Please don’t. It simply isn’t necessary. Now, off to the nunnery with you both. There’s still a chance your souls can be saved. As for the rest of you degenerates – I think it was Neville Chamberlain who once said: “Shit’s gettin’ real.” And Neville was right to be concerned…
on Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter 6
Jul 7, 09:58
I think this chapter, and probably the story as a whole, is going to divide opinions. We often see complaints in the comments that a story is too far-fetched and lacks any sense of reality. Well, that is certainly not the case here. This is raw, edgy and unapologetically honest. It’s also superbly written. I must give a nod to the editor too. It must have been tempting to dumb this down and take the edge off. I applaud the bravery of both writer and editor for letting us see this as it is. It won’t be everyone’s cup of tea, and that’s fine. No story pleases everyone. Bravo.
Jul 7, 09:26
Another Ripples chapter dropping is like a visit from an old friend, most welcome indeed. I’m glad to see we’re back on track plot wise and moving along again, it feels like the pace is picking up. Bravo, more please.
on Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter 6
Jul 7, 08:58
Exactly, very sensual, progressing slowly… I can’t wait to read the next episode
on The Family Kiss, Part One
Jul 7, 08:18
Great older story. 🙂 and the pic at the beginning.. ohh so precious made me instantly wet. 🙂
on Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter 6
Jul 6, 22:50
Absolutely, erotic, beautiful, sensual, and so hot!!! waiting for the next chapter in anxious anticipation
Jul 6, 14:11
What a wonderful story, so well told, with a beautiful progression, sensitivity and gentleness, and few characters. Bravo!
Jul 6, 13:58
We’re sorry. As you warned, the story now is not erotic to us. It’s more of True Crimes confession instead. We, instead of being turned on, felt a little queasy. Of course the writing is fantastic, we will read to see how it all goes, but it’s not a story we’ll curl to together with to get off on.
Jul 5, 12:19
Oh my God… I love these stories soooo much. 🙂 this was simple and sexy. I had a great orgasm on a Sunday morning. Imagining the pretty young pussy. And wow… you picked such a sexy cutie in the pic for the daughter. Makes me wish I was the girl in the story. Or the Mom for that matter 😉
on Ripples, Chapter 46
Jul 3, 16:15
Thanks all for your patience and perseverence and of course your continued appreciation. As Jetboy said, we/I had no idea Ripples would turn into the saga it has. In my naievete, I didn’t think it would reach double figure chapters, but that’s where my inexperience in the world of erotic literature showed. I clearly hadn’t really given enough thought up front after my initial ideas. In short, I envisioned Jess and the three girls somehow finding and joining the Society, but pretty quickly realised she needed a new adult life partner to develop her sapphic tendencies … and that’s probably where I got stuck with no actual long term plan. Thankfully, Jetboy came to my rescue and shortly after we developed our tennis match bouncing ideas back and forth. In the end, I had ideas faster than I knew how to bring them to life. The unfortunate consequence was Jetboy being bombarded with work, not just editing my prose, which in my early days was considerably extensive, but infecting him with the ideas bug so instead of telling me to wrap it up, he couldn’t help but spend half his waking hours making Ripples what it is. Anyway, the ribbon is in sight so maybe one day soon he’ll be able to snatch back some personal life. In the meantime, thank you all for accepting the occasional delays, and I promise the next story will be all done and dusted before I send it in. Famous last words?
Jul 2, 16:41
Lots of female authors here, and even the ones by men are very good, but yes lots of very good female authors. Can’t promise that it will help you understand women.
Jul 2, 09:49
Just like Kim & Sue, went back a couple chapters to get reacquainted. I forgot how fun and erotic Ripples has been. As for the new chapter, loved it! Erotically hot and wetting. Looking forward to where we go next. Smile!
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jul 2, 03:31
That is so true and funny. Only one of us men would say grow a pair of balls to be tough.. mine are very sensitive lol. Thanks for the tip on posting comments. I’m new here guided from a story on OA3 and look forward to be entertained by creative stories. I’m trying to find stories written by women so I can learn what makes them tick and their kinky minds. I already what men think since I am one. 🙂
Jul 1, 17:59
AWW!!! poor bob that should tell you that CUNT is more power full then cock
Jul 1, 16:57
We went back for our own research as to events and characters, and then thoroughly enjoyed this new chapter, that left us hanging for the next. Just keep it coming.
Jul 1, 14:50
I liked your comment and put a thumbs up for it. And though this is falsely attributed to Betty White we still like this, “Why do people say ‘grow some balls?…’ Balls are weak and sensitive. If you wanna be tough grow a vagina. Those things can take a pounding.” And yeah, once you post a comment it’s posted. So I try proof read mine before posting, but don’t always.
Jul 1, 12:36
what a hot eroctic take on mother-daughter. loved it. would have loved to see where they went with there new relationship.
Jun 30, 22:18
spell correction: coochie 🙂 and I mistakenly liked my own comment trying to see who liked my comment. I guess there’s no way to edit a comment to correct grammar?
Jun 30, 20:01
As a black person whom I would think are avid fanfic readers as well we don’t use the word “cunt” unless its by people who grew up around a lot of white folks. Personally I hate cunt. Who came with that one?? To me its a white boys way to put women down, which is interesting because we’ll call a male a pussy to put them down by calling them a girl. Plus cunt sounds corny…again maybe because we associate it with weak men or little boys. (guys if this doesn’t describe you don’t take offence its only my opinion.) I’m good with most of the ones in the long list from Sue in the comments. Other than pussy I grew up hearing and saying things like.. getting wet coochie kitty cat muff cookie pie cherry cherry pie honey
Jun 29, 22:40
You know we’re wondering if we should read upcoming chapters or not. The remark ‘Frankie doesn’t die in this version’ really makes us wonder whats ahead besides a photo shoot. It’s like seeing a car wreck, you want to look away and yet… Love that you gave us a trademark.
on Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter 5
Jun 29, 11:22
I really like this story; I’d love to see the adult women use their toys with Izzy—that girl has already gone astray—whereas Kerry deserves a more romantic seduction
Jun 28, 21:11
Kim & Sue™ are so traumatised they’ve turned to poetry as a coping mechanism! 😲 Thanks for all the comments/votes/views/poems/emojis. So many emojis… Uh, what do I have for you next time… I think it’s the photoshoot. Remember the photoshoot? 🤤
Jun 28, 15:20
Don’t hate me for this, but…I never really got Judas Priest. They just flew over my head for some reason. Re… I want to see a great performance with an interesting selection of songs which ideally surprises me. I think discussing this with I’ve come to realise that is actually a pretty tall order. To be fair to me though, I’m not up with anything very current, so there maybe a new(ish) band that fit that bill. And by very current, I mean the space in my head for new music was closed around 2010! Anyway…nice chatting, I could go like this for ages, but we’d better stop hogging the meassage board.
Jun 28, 10:58
Joe, I’m using the same criteria you are; Iron Maiden was never a hit radio/MTV singles band. And actually Maiden does have one standard: Iron Maiden (the song). They always close the main set with it. Ironically I’ve never met anyone who thinks it’s even remotely close to being their best song, and lots of people (myself included) would be just as happy if they gave it a miss. The difference between Maiden and most other legacy bands is that it’s one song, not a third or so of the setlist. To take your example of Guns ‘n Roses, if you go to one of their shows you know you’re going to hear Sweet Child, Paradise City, Welcome to the Jungle, November Rain, Patience, and probably one or two others I’m not thinking of. To be fair: Guns n Roses is a band with shockingly little catalog for how long they’ve been around and the stature they enjoy, and they were also a band that literally made their mark via MTV and a handful of very big hit singles. But consider Judas Priest, a band that’s more like Maiden in that they’ve been around for a very long time, have a large catalog to choose from, and if you ask ten fans for a favorite song, you’ll get ten different answers. That said, Priest for whatever reason doesn’t quite have Maiden’s dedicated army of worshipers. The last time my daughter and I went to a Priest show, it was in a theater. I’ve never seen Maiden anywhere other than in an arena. All the same, Priest has the same issue as Guns… an absurd number of standards. It makes matters worse that with Priest there is a BIG dichotomy between what the general public is aware of and what the deep fans like. I find Livin’ After Midnight to be a little embarrassing; it’s Priest basically writing a Kiss song to get American radio airplay. It’s a very good commercial hard rock song, but coming from the same band that just a couple of years earlier gave us Stained Class, it feels like a letdown. But of course any given audience is probably 2/3 people who have only a samplers knowledge of the band’s catalog, and Priest feels they have to cater to that audience. To be fair, Priest ameliorates that somewhat by doing a very good job of rotating in cool deep cuts. Last time I saw them, they opened with One Shot at Glory (my favorite from Painkiller!) and also played Invaders, neither of which they’d ever played before that tour. The downside is that when they’re promoting a new album (the last few of which have been outstanding), they only play a few songs from it. I get it: I’m a weirdo. There isn’t a single band where I have a strong investment in hearing any particular song live. I want to see a great performance with an interesting selection of songs which ideally surprises me, and if they have a new album, I want to hear a lot of it. Maiden gives me that. Few others do.
Jun 28, 09:24
Why can’t more bands do this?… I think it’s down to the back catalogue available to them. Maiden have an insane amount of ‘hits’ they can choose from. I use the term hits loosely, my meaning is hits with the fans rather than the charts, although some singles did do well of course. But I digress. If I went to see, say Guns n Roses, and they didn’t play Sweet Child O Mine, I’d be very annoyed, it’s kind of expected. Likewise with a lot of other bands and their one or two stand out tracks. Folks go to hear that stuff specifically. Maiden are different in that regard. I mean, we all have our fav/s (mine would Run to the Hills and Aces High) but there is no one single stand out track that’s universally agreed to be there best, such as is the case (ok, arguably) with Sweet Child O Mine, or Bohemian Rapsody for Queen, Stairway to Heaven for Zeppelin etc. If you ask a bunch of Maiden fans to choose their best track ever you’d end up with a riot on your hands. I’ve been trying hard and searching the web, but I can’t think of another big/successful band who doesn’t have that one or two big hits they have to play. I mean, Metallica could maybe get away with not playing Enter Sandman or Seek & Destroy, but I think the omission would be noted and leave fans a little disappointed. Maiden are the only band I can think of that are not tied to playing that one hit song every gig.
on The Joy of Looking, Chapter 24
Jun 27, 19:39
Has it really been over 11 years since this was published?! I remember it like it was yesterday! This is my favourite chapter, the warmth and tenderness between Julie and Kate just melts me every time I re-read it.
Jun 27, 13:15
I’ll be honest, I definitely fell short of my expected target! I think I need to spend more time on this site to get back to where I want to be 😅
Jun 27, 00:16
So cool. That’s the year I was born and my mother, being the tyrant that she is, no doubt deemed infancy to be simply too young to attend a heavy metal concert. I’ll probably never forgive her for that. Note how stacked the setlist is with stuff from Seventh Son, to the point of leaving out several of their better-known tunes (both The Trooper and 2 Minutes to Midnight are missing). They haven’t changed in this regard. They do have their history/nostalgia tours, but when they’re promoting a new album, they’re maybe the only legacy band I can think of that still does the job properly. You’re gonna hear at least five songs from the new album, and that’s keeping in mind that Maiden songs are often lengthy. Fifteen songs fill up a hundred minute show. The trick is that they don’t feel like they have to play every damn hit song they ever had at every show. They ROTATE the hits. Don’t you wish more bands would do that? Much as I love attending Judas Priest concerts, It’s irritating that I can accurately predict fully a third of the set. If you go to a Priest show, you know half an hour or more is going to be wasted on stuff you’ve heard every other damn time you’ve seen Priest. Do we really need to hear Breakin’ the Law and Livin’ After Midnight on every freakin’ tour? I don’t think so. Case in point: I saw Maiden’s Future Past tour a couple years back. That tour was intended as a celebration of the classic Somewhere in Time album (1986), combined with wrapping up the tour in support of 2021’s Senjutsu. They played five songs from Somewhere in Time, five songs from Senjutsu, and five a mix of everything else. Even in those latter five, they managed a deep cut! Instead of playing any of the usual suspects from Number of the Best (the title track, Run to the Hills, Hallowed be They Name), they gave those tired old numbers a rest and played The Prisoner! Why can’t more bands do this? Postscript: If you’d like to (sort of) relive the show you saw, a gig from that tour was filmed for the Maiden England concert video. In those days Maiden was playing different setlists depending on what part of the world they were in, and US audiences usually got a shorter show due to union issues at the venues they were playing (this silly shit has thankfully been resolved since). Therefore, Maiden England features a somewhat different setlist than the one you saw, including some very cool deep cuts like Still Life and Killers.
on Didi’s Epiphany, Part Three
Jun 26, 20:00
If you’re interested in more of my stories, here is a list of some more, Wisteria. Have fun. https://search.niftyarchives.org/?keywords=louisamay&categories%5B%5D=lesbian&subcategories%5B%5D=adult-youth&sort=Relevance&search=
Jun 26, 14:28
Yup, it was the seventh son tour. I just googled it and found the set list…oh the memories! (In truth it was a long time ago now and memories are vague!). Moonchild The Evil That Men Do Infinite Dreams Can I Play With Madness The Clairvoyant Seventh Son of a Seventh Son The Number of the Beast Hallowed Be Thy Name Iron Maiden Run to the Hills Running Free Sanctuary (encore
Jun 26, 10:35
@Emiliano: Glad you liked it! @Joe Dornish: Hi, Joe! I was wondering where you’d gone. Just so you know, you binge is still a ways off. We have twenty-two chapters to go. As regards Iron Maiden: you saw the Seventh Son of a Seventh Son tour?! I am SO jealous. I first saw them in 2004, on the Dance of Death tour, and have seen them thrice since. The last time was just a couple of years ago, on the Future Past tour. I also saw Bruce Dickinson solo late last year. @Erocritique: Glad you’re loving all the storylines and yes: they DO all come together (just not right now… sorry John Lennon). Everything here is in service to the main plot, but that is as much as I shall reveal. As regards the NWOBHM… I would submit that Maiden is GLORIOUSLY idiosyncratic. Def Leppard would end up moving in directions I find disappointing (no one who’s been reading these comment sections will be shocked to discover that I abhor Pour Some Sugar on Me), but if you haven’t heard the first two albums (On Through the Night and High ‘n Dry), then forget everything you think you know about this band and go check them out. Diamond Head is another of those bands where you listen to the first album (Lightning to the Nations) and think why oh why weren’t these guys bigger? Part of the answer is an inability to pick a lane; each of the subsequent two albums sounds quite different. Still good, but perhaps jumping around a bit too much stylistically. But as another commentor alluded to above, you NEED to hear Lightning to the Nations.
Jun 26, 07:29
Some real depth to this chapter. I enjoyed the little vignettes dedicated to the various storylines and characters (especially the scene with Vicky & Chrissy) – though I constantly wonder how everything is ultimately going to dovetail. As for the NWOBHM, I never really caught it. Iron Maiden seemed too idiosyncratic, and Def Leppard was trying too hard to be the next Led Zeppelin (imho). I am curious about Angel Witch and Diamond Head, and I’m off to see what they’re all about right now. Another incredibly enjoyable chapter, Rachel, This series and another series on a different site are currently my top two for my favorite content. A must read series. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Jun 26, 05:19
Iron Maiden was the first gig I ever went to, December 1988, Wembley arena. I was 14. Me and a friend went, his older brother got us tickets. What a gig that was. And bye the way, I’ve not been commenting as I’m saving up for a binge read when the time comes.
Jun 25, 20:08
@Pinktink: it’s my sincere hope that you find your patience to be rewarded ten thousandfold by what is to come! @Lightninginabottle: i love Diamond Head! I was talking about lomg-term commercial success, not discussing “the best”. That said: I do think Def Leppard’s second album to be an absolute highlight of the movement, and it’s really tough to argue with any of those early Maiden records. But yes: everyone should go out and listen to Diamond Head. @Kim and Sue:I’m honored that the chapter has earned repeat reads! Thanks so much to all.
Jun 25, 18:54
Excellent chapter. We’re happy the recap of chapters is available elsewhere, as it’s become longer than the chapters. And the characters page is most helpful. We strongly agree with PinkTink, time to settle in and wait for the next chapter, after a reread or two of this chapter. The opening with Nettie was fantastic, and who is that woman in the middle of the chapter? Melissa Brentshaw perhaps? Or..? Ahggg, this just keeps getting better.
on The Evil That Men Do, Chapter 20
Jun 25, 17:30
Come on, how can you talk about the best of the NWoBHM without mentioning Diamond Head, who’s first album surely eclipses both Maiden and Leppards efforts 😉
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 25, 17:26
Context is everything, But i have to say that sometimes breaking expectation is more effective. As I was girl, who was who was in elementary school not that many years ago, I can tell you, we all said cunt and pussy and not much else. No girl ever got away with saying vagina without someone giving her shit for it.
on The Evil That Men Do, Chapter 20
Jun 25, 17:09
Thanks again, Rachael! *entering meditative Buddha pose for patience until next chapter release*
Jun 25, 16:58
The New Wave of British Heavy metal marked the point at which new releases of heavy music jumped from a handful of titles a year to a veritable explosion of output. Starting in 1979(ish) and ending in 1983(ish)), it was pushed forward by dozens of hungry new bands dropping a plethora of product onto the market. There was a remarkable degree of diversity; the NWOBHM was more a movement than a sound. Only two of the new acts spawned by this movement achieved lasting large-scale international success, those being Iron Maiden and Def Leppard… leaving Iron Maiden as the only band that managed it without morphing into a pop band. You could give an honorable mention to Saxon, which has sustained a long, reasonably successful career. Angel Witch, by contrast, is a band you probably haven’t heard of unless you’re very specifically into this music. Which is a shame, because if any other band from this movement ought to have enjoyed a career to parallel that of the mighty Maiden, this is that band. Led by guitarist/vocalist Kevin Heybourne, this band’s 1980 eponymous release is my pick for the best debut of the entirety of the NWOBHM. Yes: it’s better than Iron Maiden’s first album. I just said that. Sadly, it was not to be. Lacking Maiden’s visionary management, fraught with record label difficulties, exacerbated by drug problems and Kevin Heybourne sometimes stuggling to unleash the band’s complex riffology while also providing lead vocals in the live setting, the band was utterly unable to capitalize on the initial momentum. In the wake of that marvelous first release, they fell apart. They wouldn’t release another album until 1985. When finally they did return, the NWOBHM was over. Hair metal was topping the charts in America, with thrash capturing the hearts and minds of the metal faithful. For the first album of their comeback, Angel Witch ignored these trends, putting out a record in much the same vein as the debut. With one major distinction: Heybourne wasn’t singing lead anymore. He was still playing lead guitar and doing most of the writing, but lead vocals duties were now being held down by one David Tattum. They recorded two albums under this guise, the first of which sounded like an Angel Witch record, the second more if an attempt to jump on the hair metal train. Neither sold well, and the band once again slipped into silence. Only to come roaring back once more in 2012, with Heybourne again shouldering the vocal duties. Two albums have come out since then, in 2012 and 2019. And guess what: they’re fucking wonderful. Better than anything Iron Maiden has released since at least Brave New World. They may not have had a career on Maiden’s scale, but in terms of the quality of their modern recorded output, they’re crushing their much more famous contemporaries. The theme lyrics for this chapter are the chorus to Fatal Kiss, from 1985’s Screamin’ and Bleedin’. Yes, I know, it’s one of the mid-80s David Tattum fronted records, but those albums are good and you should listen to them. In this chapter Nettie makes her first definitive move in pursuit of the evil lurking in the shadows. Final note: the last release was in 2019, but Angel Witch toured in support of King Diamond last summer, so I have some hope of more output to come. Kevin Heybourne wrote some of the best music of his life on the last two albums, and I hope he gives us more while he still can.
Jun 24, 17:32
As a comment moderator, let me add that comments like this are not welcome on anywhere on the site. I’ll leave this here as a warning to all. If you can’t give your thoughts without inserting some weird misogyny into it, then better avoid posting at all.
Jun 24, 09:11
I’m with Joe and Leafie — what word I prefer is all about context. Sometimes when sex gets down and dirty, “cunt,” is the best choice. “Pussy” is gentler, more suitable for girls to use. I do agree that in America, a man calling a woman a cunt is a hateful thing, calling for a beatdown for the culprit from a nearby gentleman. I do, however, really appreciate how they use the word in the UK, where it’s mostly a more hostile way of saying “asshole,” and the person being thus addressed is nearly always male. The words I don’t like to use are ones clearly invented and deployed by men. If women don’t ever say it, I’m not down. Some of the ones in Sue’s list above, like (shudder) “meat piggy bank,” or “penis fly trap,” give me hives. In fact, any references to meat are a no-no in my book, as are violent words like “gash.” The most distasteful image I ever read pertaining to the vagina and sex in general was written by a woman named Krystle Schoonveld and appeared at the appalling conservative website The Federalist (seriously, they suck) in an article called “6 Reasons To Sext Your Husband.” There she describes the act of coitus as “taking his skin bus to Tuna Town.” I don’t expect you to thank me for sharing that. I still recall how, after reading those words, I muttered to myself, “Well, there go my next three erections.”
Jun 24, 07:45
I didn’t know about your dislike of “vulva” and “labia,” Bee… though to be fair, I’m fairly certain you never mentioned it when I added to your work in the past. In future, I’ll refrain from using either when editing your stories.
Jun 24, 05:51
Comments like this are not welcome on my stories. Not everyone will enjoy my work, and that’s perfectly fine. Constructive criticism and genuine discussion are always welcome, even when they’re critical. Reducing female characters to “sluts” because they make their own choices is not constructive criticism. It says more about the reader than the characters.
Jun 23, 21:13
there’s nothing better then a beautiful juicy CUNT dripping right on r face
on Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter 5
Jun 23, 07:16
This is a wonderful and believable sexy story. The emerging and increasing sexual desire for lesbian sex with underage children/girls and the inner struggles against it are very nicely told. Has she really arrived in the rabbit hole or in the new reality of her (sexual) life? There is plenty of room for more exciting parts. Maybe at the dentist. A Female doctor in her 50s is aroused by eroticising fragrance of her patient.
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 22, 22:20
For my personal writing, my word choice primarily depends on the point-of-view character’s age and experience. I have my personal preferences, generally, but for the story itself, the characters get to decide, not me. For example, I wrote an adventure/apocalyptic story in which a character (age 12) was militant and largely uncaring, she used whatever language was at hand, however crass or ill-fitting. The girl cursed a lot and uses zero euphemisms, so I just went with the flow. Elsewhere, I’ve also written stories from the POV of older characters, who have education and experience and know, for example, that the term “vagina” is almost always a mislabel… so they’ll avoid the term. I’ve no aversion to using “labia” or “vulva,” which are far more technically accurate. The character is using these terms for a reason. As a reader, I’ve found myself caring less and less through the years. You know, you read erotica for 25+ years and you read a lot of bad fiction, poorly researched fiction, and fiction clearly written on impulse… Writers overuse words, use the wrong words, and entertain the strangest euphemisms out of nowhere. I’ve learned to give others as much grace as possible. Still, bad writing is bad writing, regardless of individual word choice. It happens.
on Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter 5
Jun 22, 11:14
Just as riveting as the other chapters. That lolly scene was super hot.
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 21, 20:11
Honestly when ever I see the word vagina in my head I replace it with pussy. Also cunt is a stronger word but a good choice during a rougher setting or more vulgar language use. I like both and turns me on when I hear the mother tell the daughter to not say vagina anymore but instead she speaks the word pussy or cunt when speaking about those parts. But thats my opinion. Now I’m sensually aroused and need a story to read.
on When the Past Meets the Present, Chapter 1
Jun 21, 19:16
id love to see the movie if it even half vas hot as the read
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 21, 17:04
I prefer pussy, cunny, kitty, and Mound (as in mound of venus) for the words, but I am fine with anything else because it is purely for erotica.
Jun 21, 15:37
i just love this story i hop the the mom’s get the kid’s in to toy’s like nipple clamp or starpon
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 21, 12:47
This is a subject I’ve given some thought to for a while so I’m glad to see it here. Having read through the comments I agree that the age of the characters involved and the type of story directly affect the best word usage immensely. I remember a story involving a young girl where the overuse of the word “Muff” was distracting to the point of anger. “Cunt” is easily improperly used, especially in relation to girls. “Pussy”rarely offends me but I do understand a writers problem in the overuse of any word and age and context are always in play. Being overly crude,to me,is often a turnoff so some inventive use of a thesaurus is needed. Re-read the lists people have included, each have their place. I only offer the addition of the word “Mimsy” and only to girls or women in a story set in the 1940’s and earlier especially in England. Happy reading and writing to you all.
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 21, 10:46
What a vexatious issue! I had a girlfriend who informed me that when it was ‘at rest’ it was her pussy, but when ‘aroused’ it was her cunt, and I’d better learn the difference. I have never really liked the term pussy, especially in these times when the pubic ‘fur’ the term alludes to has become close to endangered. The term vagina always makes me cringe a little when used to reference the female genitalia generally, especially when delivered with an air clinical correctness. It is of course an internal organ. Latin terms (where used correctly) are safe, but not very erotic. Pudenda would be useful if not for its connection to shame, and the fact it’s a rather ugly frumpy sort of word. Cunt is in much wider general use in UK, and even more so in Australia where I reside. Although still not a polite word it doesn’t have the shock impact it carries in North America. Appropriateness of some terms and twee euphemisms around the young adds another layer of complexity. All in all it comes down to context.
Jun 21, 09:50
For me, there’s no right or wrong term. It all depends on the situation, the word has to fit the person and the environment they’re in. Pussy generally seems to be the most acceptable and widely used, and because of this it is the one most of my characters use. But I do stop and think if it is the right word every time I use it. I’m writing something set in 1950s Britain right now and I’ve found fanny my go to word, with cunt a close second depending on the character. I get the same issues with men’s genitalia when I’m writing straight fiction on other sites.
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 21, 09:43
I like the word “slit”. It describes a little girls pussy very well I think.
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 21, 00:57
Constant use of cunt is also putting me off, although occasionally as a naughty escalation it may fit. 🌸Am not a native speaker, so I might not always be familiar with a words connotations. As an admirer of child 👧🏻girls exploring bodies with their mums, childish 🧸🎈language is appropriate and the more creative an author the better: words that sound trivial, words that sound romantic, words that sound clinical, words that sound Ironical etc. Use the entire repertoire and more!💕 Sue and Suzy gave here above a nice list. I like kitty (reminds me of hello kitty panties), slit, clit, damp place, 💦wet spot, special place, love tunnel, tickle spot, weewee hole, play garden, mummy’s playground, fresh mound, baby fountain, lust fold, pussy, still bald fold, G point, lilgirl point, …
Jun 20, 23:23
I think the use of pussy, cunt, vagina, etc, depends on the author’s story plan and how the author wants to describe her/his sex events. Myself I prefer pussy, occasional use of cunt, but only to describe a part of a female’s anatomy, and vagina does little for me and prefer limited use of the word. All other descriptors of a pussy are fine with limited use as needed. All JS authors what say you, we readers are interested to see what you feel and think. This certainly is an interesting subject for JS.
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 20, 22:23
I was taught in school to use a wide range of words and expressions. “That way,” I believe it was my 3rd-grade English teacher who said, “you’ll always be interesting and never run out of ideas.” She also said not to use the same nouns or phrases in the same paragraph. She then promptly made me hand copy the dictionary word-for-word. Lol. Took about a month. In any case, I like pussy as much as vagina, and that’s a bad cunt pun right there, folks. Gotcha! hahaha
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 20, 22:22
I default to pussy, I think it stems from first hearing the “naughty” term at a young age. I was about 8 years old and I heard it from my babysitter when she was on the phone taking to a friend. “No, no, he wasn’t too long. That wasn’t the problem, he was just so thick. It felt like my pussy was being stretched out by a damn baseball bat.” That stuck with me, especially once I figured out what she was talking about.
Jun 20, 20:37
I like pussy or cunt. I like cunt as a sexual word for vagina in erotica but hate it in other context. I hate using pussy as an insult also. Vagina can be ok if it’s not used too much and doesn’t feel clinical. Silly terms are ok if the general tone is kind of silly anyway. Folds or petal or poetic terms are nice if they fit the story. Kitty or cunny or something like that are cool if they fit who is using them. I absolutely Abhor the term “princess parts”. Mostly I feel like whatever term used should really fit the specific context in the story. I like that we are discussing this.
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 20, 17:49
As a fan of erotic lesbian incest fiction, especially when describing underage girls and their mom’s, I actually like the word vagina. Yes, it’s clinical but its also soft, and girly. Cunt makes me cringe making me think of a butch lesbian who is almost manly in some bondage scenario. Its just too overly aggressive. I’m more into soft loving girly lesbian style writing. So my words that turn me on are Vagina, pussy and kitty….sometimes slit if its used properly in context of making it sound sexy, soft, and innocent.
Jun 20, 16:16
I don’t know of any good ones besides those, but I’ve heard and or used some of these twat furburger bearded clam quim fishtaco grotto of love hair pie tunnel of love the little boy in the canoe (for the clit) fanny Some I’ve heard but haven’t really used flower fandango my sex down there thingy muff box penis fly trap beaver coochie cookie minge snatch vertical smile cherry honey pot slit neither region valley of no return grand canyon peach venus mound treasure petals loves alter snug harbor garage carport meat piggy bank pink taco
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 20, 15:52
I prefer the word “pussy,” but it can also be used way too many times, so resorting to the occasional “cunt” is okay. A lot of us don’t like the word “cunt” because of its derogatory use by certain men who fear/hate women. While I am okay with a character using “cunt” in the text, calling a woman “a cunt” would be an instant turnoff for me, even if it’s a woman calling another woman that. I’ve been called a cunt before, and I can attest to the fact that it’s a deplorable word when used in that context of name-calling. It was because I would not let a guy fuck me. My reply to him was satisfying: “Yes, I have one, and you can’t have it.” Still, the memory raises my hackles a bit. As for “vagina,” that word is okay with me, provided it’s not the only word used for a woman’s genitals. THAT would sound too clinical. Other good words: “pubes,” “mound,” “lips,” “labia,” or when appropriate, the more precise “clit.”
on Let’s Talk About Pussy
Jun 20, 15:16
First off can I liken it to reality… among the young at least. When I was about twelve or thirteen which is not very long ago — amongst us girls, we liked the terms pussy or cunt. Nobody said vagina! Except for sex educationalists. When I began writing, I automatically used pussy. I don’t very often used cunt. In fact, I remember suggesting to Misty Meadow that she used that term far too often. I do rather hate it when editors add the terms labia and vulva to my stories. But, I thought that was just me being a bit picky. It still makes me wince though. When it is the very young speaking in a story though, then some of the childish terms, such as kitty or purse are fine… but not when they’re a bit older. My thoughts only, for what they’re worth.
on The Hire
Jun 20, 15:00
This was the sexiest and most sensual story I have read here so far. And I would extremely love to see a sequel. Please?????? Maybe a year from now, when she has received some training, as Miss Catherine’s successor. ps: love the site
Jun 20, 11:51
Love the premise of this chapter, but, sorry, I feel that 5 yrs old is just too far down the rabbit hole to write about. no younger than 8 yrs old is my prefered limit
Jun 20, 10:48
I think I might have hinted at this in my comment on the previous chapter, but the brutal honesty in this story is wonderfully compelling. And that honesty is not easy to write. But here it’s done so wonderfully that the characters and their actions are almost believable in the most unbelievable of situations. Bravo indeed. I want more Please. Much more.
Jun 19, 19:57
Loved the story so much. A couple of times on a train I have seen little girls sitting on the Seat with their legs drawn up showing their panties tight against their pussy. Could someone write a story of two mothers and two daughters age 5 and 10 not known to each other on a night sleeper and getting up to some naughty stuff. Watch out for the horny female ticket inspector.
Jun 19, 17:17
While I’m sure your thoughts are appreciated, um… well… You should probably read this page, too: https://www.juicysecrets.club/blog/2021/03/31/cheryl-taggert-1982-2021/
Jun 19, 12:17
lovely, exciting, HOT, and filled with great mother-daughter love
Jun 18, 16:53
The Tell Tale Panties by Edna Alice Poe Once upon a midnight dreary as I rubbed my cunt so wet and hairy I heard a tap tap taping at my chamber door I had a most delicious shiver when I heard a young voice quiver Mommy? Can I watch you once more? In walked my sweet Leonore though I’d told her nevermore she was Mommy’s little whore ready to score After I’d undressed her and caressed her she wanted more so even though I’d told her nevermore we ended up rolling naked on the floor. Our apologies to everyone.
Jun 18, 11:54
excellent chapter, love your slow build and your treatment of disabilities
Jun 17, 21:46
Mommy where do get these beautiful picture’s
Jun 17, 20:19
Cheryl i love this is was so hot i love the ogry’s u make it sound so real
Jun 16, 23:01
Bluejean, your story leaves me awestruck and eagerly soaking in each sentence: that’s by far the most brilliant sex education arrangement i have ever read 🥰 it comes across as so natural and less artificial than anything we may have experienced ourselves. And yet it draws ❤️🔥it’s pleasurable intensity from the always present memory of chapter one’s kiddie porn gazing. Indeed, the sending Kerry off to be alone, without even praising her bare ass, cones across as a bit blunt… but this only reminds us that Sarah and Frankie are naturally still testing the waters themselves and not quite sure how to behave. We expect a growing intensity of the bonding in the next chapters! It is brilliant how the chat message about video keeps the arousal growing and I’m getting already 💦moister at the idea of sister Judy soliciting more depraved videos. Very hot the age (de)escalation, starting with adult sex in chapter 1 plus 8yo girl knickers, mentioning the 5year old niece only briefly in chapter 2, … there is more to cum abd that’s terrific 🌸🧸💦
Jun 16, 22:18
BlueJean, you caught all my attention. From the appealing title and the mysterious hints in the intro onwards we are captivated… intensely empathizing with this loving mother 💕 who discovers her « other » side, or should we better say: her true inner feelings? Sentence for sentence we fall closer to depravity … and discover that we like it along with this exceptional Mum who can’t help bit imagine her eight-year old nymphet 🧚🏻in the middle of it. Sniffing little girl panties 👙🌸 while enjoying her partner between toys 🧸 in her child ‘s room 🎈 This makes us wonder how the next chapters may evolve… Brilliant start! 👏🏼🩵
Jun 16, 19:26
🎀 thanks, Jetboy! Lovely setting and amazing family! 💕- i agree with craw here that it happens all very quickly . « …My little girl, bless her, was already stripping off, unfastening her skirt and casting it aside. The top quickly followed, leaving her naked.(…)“And I wanted to lick Maggie’s pussy!” my daughter declared. She unfastened her skirt and let it drop to the floor, leaving her naked.(…) As for Stacy, I’d never seen her so happy. » We’d surely all love to see *every* 💕ten-year young child as happy 🙃as Stacy . Would indeed be wonderful to have a part three where we will be sensing the child’s emotions while her three adult lovers discover step by step every fold of her young body 🥰with all its scents 🌸and moistures 💦
Jun 16, 04:56
ORGY TIME BRING ON THE JUICEY PUSSY’S
Jul 19, 01:37
yaaaaaaaaaaaa orgy time!!!!!