Ultimate Surrender, Chapter 12

  • Posted on June 1, 2017 at 12:01 pm

By Girl Lover

The drive to Walnut Grove took the better part of two hours as they rode farther west into Colorado. Nestled in a valley in the foothills of the Rockies, it was a small, quaint town, quite picturesque compared to the big city of Austin. They arrived in the early afternoon on a warm, sunny day.

Kala led the way as Jennie pointed out which direction they should go. Soon they came to a large house situated back from the highway on the far edge of town. A two-story home, it was reminiscent of a log cabin, only much bigger and more luxurious. Pulling into the driveway, they stopped beside a path that wound its way through various wood and metal sculptures scattered around the yard up to a covered porch running the length of the house.

As Raven and Bonnie stayed on their bike, Jennie and Kala got off. While Jennie joyously ran up onto the porch and knocked on the front door, Kala walked uncertainly toward the house. Several seconds later, the door opened to reveal a slightly chubby, gray-haired woman in her sixties.

“Grandma!” Jennie exclaimed excitedly, throwing her arms around her.

For a second, the woman looked down at the little girl in shock, then suddenly burst out, “JENNIE!” and hugged her just as fiercely. After a long hug, she pulled back. “But — what are you doing here?!”

Glancing up, she saw a tough-looking young woman with a mohawk standing nearby, and another woman and a girl waiting out in the driveway next to a pair of motorcycles. “Jennie… where’s your mom??” she frowned.

“She’s not here. I’m living with Kala,” Jennie explained, pointing.

The woman shook her head in confusion. “Living with… I…”

Kala slowly walked up onto the porch, offering a nervous smile as she introduced herself. “Hi, my name is Kala. I’ve been taking care of Jennie. I took her in a couple of weeks ago after I found out her father was beating her.”

“She rescued me, Grandma,” Jennie proudly proclaimed, giving Kala a hug.

“See, he was… running a meth lab out of their house,” Kala added as she petted the girl’s hair. “It was a really bad environment for her.”

The older woman’s face reddened in anger. “I knew it! He was always a troublemaker, bad news, but for some reason my daughter stood up for him — even when he hit her.”

Turning to Jennie, she continued, “Honey, when your father took you and your mom away to Texas, I tried to find you. I tried so hard, but I didn’t know where to look.” Her face softened to a more concerned look. “Jennie… where is your mother?”

“With Dad, back in Austin.”

Kala took Jennie’s grandmother aside for a moment, whispering so the child wouldn’t hear what she had to say. “I’m sorry, but… your daughter overdosed. I saw her. She’s gone.”

The woman’s hands came up to her face, her lip quivering, eyes brimming with tears. “Oh my god…” she sighed, a tear sliding down her cheek. She closed her eyes, “Oh god oh god oh god — why did you ever stay with him?”

Kala went back to Jennie, waiting while the older woman silently grieved.

After a minute or so, she wiped her eyes, took a deep breath, and said, “Well… I still have my granddaughter, and for that, I’m forever grateful.”

She gave Jennie another warm hug and then, remembering the others out in the driveway, she nodded toward them. “So, who are your friends?”

Jennie pointed, “Um, that one is Bonnie. She’s my best friend at school. And the big lady is Raven. She’s nice.”

Her grandmother smiled. “Well, sweetie, how about if you all come in the house and I’ll fix some lunch for us, all right?” She opened the front door, and she and Jennie went inside.

Kala walked over to Raven. “It seems okay. She’s invited us to stay for lunch.”

Raven didn’t respond, just shrugged and then slowly wheeled her bike farther up the driveway, parking beside the house. Kala wheeled her own bike up and parked it beside Raven’s.

Inside, the home had a comfortable, rustic feel with all the furniture made of wood. While Grandma was in the kitchen preparing their meal, the others looked around.

Kala stopped at a framed photo on the wall of the living room. She saw Jennie, a few years younger, standing beside a man and woman. Kala knew these must be her parents, although the pair was almost unrecognizable compared to the wasted couple she’d seen in the shack in Austin. She shook her head.

Bonnie was occupied with the bookcase, where she’d discovered a large collection of mystery novels and was browsing through them. Raven stood next to Bonnie, an arm on her shoulder.

Taking Kala’s hand, Jennie said, “C’mon, lemme show you Grandma’s garden.” She led her to a set of patio doors, then outside behind the house.

With Jennie pulling her along, Kala saw numerous flowering plants lined up along a path leading into the woods. Slowing to a leisurely stroll, they walked hand in hand along the path, with Jennie excitingly pointing out the prettiest flowers and picking some to give to Kala.

They followed the scenic path and soon came to a small stream. With the sun shining through the trees and the sounds of birds chirping in the forest, Kala felt relaxed and happy, better than she had felt in a very long time.

Kneeling down, she and Jennie gazed at one another. Jennie, with her typical shy, bashful look, drew Kala in until Kala was kissing the little girl deeply as her hand ran through her hair.

They started back. Nearing the house, they were surprised to find Grandma sitting on a bench on the back porch. As they walked up the steps, she said, “Jennie, why don’t you and Kala come and have a seat with me for a minute.”

Curious, Kala sat down in an adjacent chair while Jennie settled in beside her grandmother. It was quiet for a time, with the older woman staring out toward the trees, before finally saying, “Kala, first I want to tell you how much I appreciate your rescuing Jennie, and taking care of her… but I would like to know something.”

She looked directly at Kala. “How long have you been having sex with my granddaughter?”

Kala’s face paled. She had no idea how to respond. “What… I… I don’t know what you mean.”

“Please don’t lie to me.”

Kala hesitated for several seconds, then admitted, “It-it just sorta happened. I never forced her to do anything. She wanted to and so did I.”

“The only reason I’m giving you a chance to explain,” the old woman said sternly, “is that I can see how much Jennie cares for you, as well as all you’ve done for her. But tell me — how did having sex with a nine-year-old girl ‘just sorta happen?’”

“Well, we… we were in the hot tub at my house, and she wanted to touch me and… I wanted to touch her. One thing led to another, and…”

“I wanted to, Grandma. I liked it!” Jennie chimed in.

Turning to the girl, her grandmother said, “Honey, did Kala ever make you do anything you didn’t want to do?”

Jennie immediately shook her head, nearly sobbing, “No, she didn’t! Please don’t make her go away!”

Grandma smiled and patted her leg, consoling her, “Jennie, it’s okay. I’m not going to make her leave, I promise. I just want to make sure she’s not hurting you.”

“She’s not!” Jennie jumped up and ran to Kala, hugging her tightly.

The older woman sighed, shaking her head. “It’s hard for me to understand this, how an adult can have… feelings for a child… and vice versa. But, you know, now that I think about it, when I was in third grade I remember I had the biggest crush on my teacher, Mrs. Kruse,” she chuckled. “So I guess such feelings aren’t really that unusual after all. But I do want to ask you, Kala, why’re you attracted to a child and not an adult?”

Feeling a sense of relief that the woman apparently wasn’t going to call the police on her, Kala relaxed a bit as she replied, “I… don’t really know how to answer that, any more than why I like women instead of men. It’s just… what I feel. When I first met Jennie, I honestly wasn’t that attracted to her, not like that. But over time, we just sorta grew on each other.”

“All right,” said Grandma, shrugging. “And how long have ya’ll been together?”

Jennie spouted, “A long time,” with Kala clarifying, “Almost two weeks.”

“Are Raven and Bonnie also in… a relationship?”

Not wanting to answer that question, but not knowing how to avoid it, Kala ducked her head and nodded slightly.

“Raven’s nice to Bonnie too, Grandma,” Jennie defended them. “She loves her!”

“Yes, I’m sure she does,” the woman said. She stood and took Jennie’s hand. “Come on, let’s have some grub.”

As they were heading back inside, Kala asked, “How — how did you know about me and Jennie?”

Grandma smiled. “From the way you two look at each other. Also, there’s a clearing in the trees where I saw y’all kissing.”

Raven and Bonnie were on the couch in the living room, sitting very close together looking at some books. After she’d observed them for a few seconds, Grandma announced that lunch was ready.

Walking into the dining room, they found a stack of sandwiches on a platter, plus carrot sticks, celery sticks, veggie dip, two bowls of olives and a basket of tortilla chips set out on the table, along with a big pitcher of iced tea. Quite the spread.

They sat down to enjoy the meal, with the little girls chattering away. Then Grandma surprised them. With a twinkle in her eye, she turned to Bonnie and Raven, asking, “So, tell me, how’d you two lovebirds happen to meet?”

As Raven and Bonnie sat dumbfounded, Kala said to Raven, “She knows.”

“Knows what?”

“About us and the girls. You know, everything.”

“So, how’d you two meet?” Grandma repeated.

Raven looked at the older woman, then hesitantly began, “I… well, I ran into Bonnie one night back in Austin, Texas, hoping to get into this club where I… used to perform.”

Bonnie nodded.

It was quiet around the table, everyone waiting.

Grandma studied Raven and Kala, before saying, “You know, I’ve never looked kindly before on folks like you. Bikers, hoodlums. People like that are typically up to no good — but I can tell you two are different.”

She reached out to touch Kala’s hand. “Kala, you love my granddaughter very much, and you seem to be taking good care of her. She’s obviously very happy. Raven, I can see that you love Bonnie just as much. It’s funny, we’re always told that children are too young to make their own decisions, and that adults should never have close relationships with children. But you two, you four, have shown me that’s nonsense. I think that you all are very good for each other. You should be together. In fact, I…”

The older woman stopped to clear her throat. Her eyes glistened. Looking at Jennie, she continued, “My beautiful granddaughter Jennie, my darling little girl, has been out of my life for so long, too long, and now I… what I’m trying to say is, I’ve got plenty of room and if ya’ll don’t already have someplace else, I really would like for you to stay right here with me, all of you.”

Raven blinked at her in surprise. “Really?”

“Yes, really.”

With a feeling of exhilaration, Kala said, “Wow, that’s — that’s great. We’ve been looking for a place to live.”

“You’ve found it,” Grandma smiled.

*****

After lunch, Raven and Bonnie went out to the back porch. Sitting on the bench, Raven asked Bonnie, “What do you think about us living here?”

“I like it, a lot.”

“Bonnie, I, it feels like we’re at a crossroads. I keep thinking of your parents not knowing what happened to their daughter, wondering if they’ll ever see her again.”

“I don’t want to live with them, though. I want to live with you.”

“What about your parents?”

“I’ll keep in touch, sorta. So they’ll know I’m safe.”

Raven looked at the child with a mixture of joy and sadness. “This is really what you want? You’ve thought about it?”

“Yes!”

The rest of the afternoon was spent situating themselves, putting their bikes inside the big garage and moving all their stuff into the upstairs bedrooms Grandma showed them.

After starting some dirty clothes in the washing machine, the two former Burning Angels walked outside to watch the kids as they raced around the yard chasing each other.

“So, what do you think?” Kala asked Raven.

“Bonnie likes it here. That’s all I care about.”

“I like it too. This is just what the girls need.”

At dusk, Grandma called them all in for dinner. Afterwards, the girls played hide and seek with Raven and Kala, as the older woman watched from her rocker on the front porch while she knitted.

*****

With bedtime approaching, Kala felt increasingly nervous. The fact that she would be sleeping with a little girl, and that the child’s grandmother was fully aware that they might have sex, was… well, maybe it wasn’t wrong, but it definitely was weird.

No one else seemed to be uneasy. They’d come inside about an hour earlier, the kids playing, the adults sitting and chatting. Now, when Grandma said it was time for bed, Jennie hopped up from the floor and ran over to gave her a big hug and kiss. Grandma simply hugged and kissed Jennie in return and wished the others a good night too. They all headed up the stairs, said goodnight a second time, then went to their separate bedrooms.

As she began to get undressed, Kala said, “I really can’t believe your grandma’s all right with us sleeping together like this.”

“I told you she was nice,” Jennie replied nonchalantly, pulling off her clothes. After she was naked, she jumped into bed, beaming at Kala.

Kala climbed in after the girl, pulling the covers up over them. Seeing the way Jennie was looking at her, she asked, “Are you wanting to?”

Jennie nodded excitedly, a big grin on her face.

“I don’t know if we should.”

“Grandma says it’s okay.”

“And you’re okay doing it… with your grandmother right down the hall?”

Jennie nodded once more, showing no hesitation.

“Well, we just need to be quiet so she won’t hear. Sooo, what do you want to do?”

“Can you kiss my missy? I like it cuz it feels really good.”

Kala smiled at her cuteness. “All right.”

As Jennie turned onto her back, Kala pushed the covers away and moved down between the child’s legs, her tiny vulva before her. As she ran her finger along it, marveling at the smoothness and softness, she glanced up. Jennie was propped on her elbows, watching very closely, a slight smile on her face.

With Jennie’s eyes on her, Kala leaned down and kissed the closed lips of her little pussy. Holding her mouth to it, her tongue pushed its way inside as her thumbs spread the smooth lips apart.

Kala’s eager tongue bathed Jennie’s sex, swirling all around. Glancing up again, she saw that Jennie was now lying flat on her back, staring up at the ceiling, breath coming in quick pants. As Kala watched, her tongue rubbing over the child’s clit, up and down, back and forth, over and over, Jennie suddenly exclaimed, “Oh Kala! …oooh… my missy, my missy, my missy…”

If it hadn’t been so erotic, Kala would’ve laughed. Jennie’s cute antics were what turned her on so much.

Suddenly Jennie grabbed Kala’s hair as she started gasping, almost crying. Her whole body went stiff and a high-pitched squeal came out of her mouth — worrying Kala that Grandma might hear. Though she knew their relationship had the woman’s blessing, she still didn’t want to flaunt it. Kala turned to look at the door, half-expecting Grandma to knock angrily, but the door remained closed and silent.

When Kala turned back, she saw that Jennie had already fallen fast asleep. Snickering quietly, she crawled up beside her, pulling the covers over them both as she gently wrapped her arms around the girl and soon fell asleep herself.

*****

The moment Raven got undressed and lay down in bed in their own room, Bonnie quickly crawled on top of her, grabbing her boobs.

Raven smiled up at her, “What’re you doing?”

“I’m Queen Bonnie! You hafta do what I say!” Bonnie exclaimed in a playful voice.

“Oh, I do, huh?”

“Yeah, or I’ll punish you!” she retorted, squeezing the nipples hard between her thumbs and forefingers.

Raven chuckled, thinking to herself, ‘God, I love this girl!’

“First, you’re gonna… ” Bonnie paused, making it obvious she hadn’t quite decided what she wanted Raven to do.

“Spank your butt?” Raven suggested.

“No!” Bonnie scowled down at the woman. “You’re… gonna… KISS MY BUTT! And tell me it tastes good!” Bonnie beamed proudly at her declaration.

Raven tried not to laugh too loudly as Bonnie climbed off and got on all fours, leaning over with her little butt sticking out.

“Start kissing!” the girl commanded.

“As you wish,” Raven nodded, then gladly knelt down behind Bonnie’s upraised bottom. Placing a hand on each butt cheek and using her thumbs to spread them apart, Raven could clearly see her wrinkled anus. Pushing her face into the crack, she began kissing it fervently.

“Tell me it tastes good!” Bonnie commanded.

“Mmm, it’s delicious.”

Bonnie burst into laughter, singing out, “You think my butt’s de-li-cious! You think my butt’s de-li-cious!”

Raven continued to luxuriate in Bonnie’s ass until the girl turned around, decreeing, “Now you hafta let me play with your boobies!”

“As you wish.”

Raven lay on her back while Bonnie climbed on top of her again and commenced grabbing and twisting the woman’s large breasts in all manner of ways. After a few minutes of this, Raven suddenly sat up, tumbling Bonnie over onto her back.

“Hey, wait!” the girl cried, “I’m not done yet!”

Raven smiled as she pressed her finger in between the outer lips of Bonnie’s vulva. Slowly rubbing back and forth, she watched Bonnie’s expression as she quickly lost interest in being queen, instead surrendering to Raven’s expert manipulations.

Bonnie’s breathing steadily became heavier, her hips twitching and jerking, as Raven continued stroking her. She tried her best to say, between gasps, “R-right there… y-y-yeah… ohhh… that feeeEEEEEELssss…”

Her body suddenly tensed up as her hands grasped wildly at the sheets. With Bonnie’s cute face scrunching as if she’d bit into a lemon, she held her breath, squeaked once, then let it all out in a long shuddering moan.

Raven watched, amazed, repeating to herself, ‘God, I love this girl.’

As usual, Bonnie fell asleep afterwards. Raven lay down beside her, pulling the covers over them and caressing her cheek. Tenderly kissing her young lover goodnight, Raven curled her arm around the child and fell asleep beside her.

*****

Kala awoke to a knock on the door and Grandma’s voice announcing cheerfully, “Breakfast is ready!”

Looking over at Jennie who was still asleep, she admired her for a moment, stroking her forehead and brushing some hair from her face. Then she leaned over and kissed her belly button. As her fingers lightly grazed over the girl’s tummy, Jennie suddenly squirmed, letting out her adorable giggle.

Kala lay back down beside her, staring into her blue eyes. “Grandma says it’s time for breakfast.”

Jennie’s face lit up as she remembered where she was. Throwing off the covers, she leaped out of bed and started pulling on her clothes. Kala got dressed also, slightly regretting how Jennie was covering up her beautiful naked body, but reminding herself that every night she would be able to enjoy it again.

As they left the room to go downstairs, they met Bonnie and Raven coming out of their bedroom. The four smiled happily at each other.

Seating themselves around the table, Grandma served them pancakes, while mentioning, “After we eat, we need to go enroll Jennie and Bonnie in school.”

“School?!” Raven exclaimed in surprise.

“Yes, school.”

Kala said, “But, you know, we don’t have any records or birth certificates or anything. They’re not gonna believe we’re their moms.”

Grandma assured them, “I’ll go with you. I know the people over there. It’ll be fine.”

After breakfast, the girls went up to their rooms, returning shortly with their backpacks. “Now just remember,” Grandma addressed them all before they left, “at the school, you are mothers and daughters, not girlfriends. That means a hug and a quick kiss goodbye, nothing else.”

While Grandma drove to the school in her car, the others followed behind. Groups of kids, and adults too, stared in wonder when they pulled into the parking lot on their bikes then dismounted and headed toward the front entrance. As Kala and Jennie walked along, they overheard a young boy exclaim, “Whoa, did you see that motorcycle?!”

Kala smiled down at Jennie, “Looks like you’re going to be popular.”

Jennie, looking apprehensive, gripped Kala’s hand nervously. “What if nobody likes me?”

“Bonnie will be with you, and besides, the motorcycle makes you totally cool.” That made Jennie smile.

Meeting Grandma at the door, they followed her in as everyone continued to stare. Inside the office, she greeted the receptionist, “Hello, Mabel,” before pointing to Jennie. “This is my granddaughter, Jennie. We need to enroll her and her friend, Bonnie. Their birth certificates and vaccination records were lost during the move here. These two ladies are their mothers.”

The receptionist, a short, nearsighted older woman dressed conservatively and wearing horn-rimmed glasses, pulled out two forms, laying them on the counter. “They’ll need to fill these out.”

Raven strode to the counter, followed by Kala. Mabel’s eyes loomed out of her head as the two leather-jacket-clad punk women walked up. Kala took her form over to Jennie, sitting down beside her while Raven remained at the counter, taking a pen from the startled receptionist.

Shortly after beginning, Raven looked over at Bonnie, who was sitting quietly in a chair next to Jennie. “Bonnie, when were you born?”

Mabel’s eyes loomed out again in disbelief as she asked, “You don’t know your own daughter’s birthday?!”

“Am I supposed to?” Raven growled at the woman.

“Raven…” Grandma reminded her of her manners.

Raven continued filling out the information as best she could. When they were finished, they handed the forms to Mabel, who said, “Okay, they will both be in Ms. Wenthe’s class. It’s room number 4 down the hall and to the left.”

Stepping from the office into the hall, Grandma said to Raven and Kala, “I’ll meet ya’ll back at the house. Just remember what I told you about being mothers and daughters.”

After hugging Jennie goodbye, she turned to leave. Raven, Kala, Bonnie, and Jennie walked on down the hall toward Ms. Wenthe’s room. Upon reaching it, Raven and Kala knelt down and hugged the girls. Kala said to Jennie, “I’ll pick you up after school. I love you.” Raven said the same to Bonnie.

Jennie was nervous about all the strange faces, but Bonnie took her hand, squeezing it to reassure her as they walked into the classroom. The teacher pointed out their desks, which were next to each other. As they took their seats, one of the boys sitting near them said, “I really like your moms’ motorcycles!” Bonnie and Jennie thanked him as another girl smiled and said hi to them.

Out in the hall, Raven and Kala stood watching through the window in the door.

“Looks like they’re going to be fine,” Kala remarked.

Raven didn’t say anything, just shook her head.

Kala looked at her, “What’re you thinking?”

“This. What happened to us? We used to not have any obligations. We could do anything we wanted. We were part of the biggest and most respected female biker gang in the country. We were above everyone, answering to no one… now look at us. We just dropped our ‘daughters’ off at school. Our future now is PTA meetings and school recitals… and I got fucking shot too!”

“You don’t regret Bonnie or any of it, do you?”

“No, of course not. It’s just that… I can’t believe how much my life has changed, all because of her.”

Kala nodded slowly as she watched Jennie pulling out her pencils, opening a fresh clean notebook.

“I know. We gave up everything for them. It’s the ultimate surrender.”

THE END

 

19 Comments on Ultimate Surrender, Chapter 12

  1. Sam says:

    Sad that this has ended, could have had some kick arse PTA meetings. Loved this story.

  2. Jennifer says:

    Wow, this story was hell of a ride, thank you, Girl Lover! But could you perhaps think about a sequel to this story that gives us insights into their future lives, their love, their everyday life, their desires and dreams, simply their lives? I am very curious as to how it goes on, how they clark with everything. I think that could be really exciting again! Just a thought of my reader´s heart! *chuckles* 😀

    • Girl Lover says:

      I would like to continue this, but right now I don’t have any ideas on how to do it. Also I have several other stories that I am eager to work on. My next story won’t be nearly as long as this one and hopefully I’ll have it finished in a few months

  3. Cheryl says:

    Congratulations, Girl Lover!! What a wonderful story! Thank you for the submission, and I hope we get another one soon. 🙂

    • Girl Lover says:

      I have four others stories in the works and hopefully the first one will be finished in a few months

      • JetBoy says:

        Now THAT’S good news! Looking forward to your next creation, GL! (And the next, and the next…)

  4. Megan Day says:

    If not a sequel, perhaps an epilogue showing the passage of time and some highlights? Loved the story, great ending. I do love happy endings. 🙂

    Megan

  5. kacey says:

    Thanks for the ride, Girl. It’s been a journey and a half, with plenty of twists and turns along the way. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed this story, thank you. Agree with the others, an epilogue would be nice 😀

  6. PoppaBear says:

    Great story, Girl Lover.

    It was like a crazy film for me; that’s how well you write. I could see and hear everything.

    Just imagine, girls, a film with nine-year-old schoolgirls making love with lesbian bikers.

    • Cheryl says:

      I actually started writing a full-length play where that kind of thing happens, but I’ve temporarily abandoned it because it is so much harder and time-consuming to write. EVERYTHING is in the dialogue, and I found myself writing a great deal of “notes” in the stage directions to make sure the readers understood the nuances and everything. So far, only Lisa and Naughty Mommy and JetBoy have seen it, and it may have to stay that way for a while.

      But it is a wonderful fantasy, isn’t it??

  7. revelnit says:

    Great story. Would be fun to see more adventure based intergenerational romance. Thanks.

  8. JetBoy says:

    What a lovely, thrilling, intensely sexy story. I enjoyed every chapter. Thanks, Girl Lover!

  9. kim says:

    We are glad it had a happy ending. In real life I don’t think it may have turned out as well. We wish it had gone on a little longer. Would have really enjoyed seeing the 4 main characters all having sex together, with grandma joining the fun. Yeah and some of the new friends from school too. But I guess we can do that in our heads. All that said, great story all the way.

  10. Rube says:

    Ah, thank you for the delightful ending. At points during the story, I had despaired for how everything would work out. Wonderfully.

  11. Blizzard says:

    I’m so sad this story is over. It was an addiction for a while, always checking for a new chapter. I second (or third I guess) the idea about a sequel to this. This was a fantastic ride and I wish more people could read it than just the people on this site.

  12. Drodrobot says:

    This story was ruined by the author’s use of violence to solve conflict.

    There is nothing sexy about killing people.

  13. Steve says:

    Absolutely a great story keep them coming

  14. Bryan says:

    Fantastic story

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