Ultimate Surrender, Chapter 4

  • Posted on April 20, 2017 at 12:34 pm

By Girl Lover

On Thursday, the next day at school, Bonnie and Jennie were both tired. All during class they exchanged knowing smiles as they each couldn’t wait for lunch to come so Jennie could tell Bonnie all about Kala. Finally, it was lunchtime and they were at their usual spot at the cafeteria table.

As they sat down, Bonnie excitedly whispered, “Well?!”

Jennie quietly squealed, “OHMYGOD! That was sooo awesome!” Leaning closer so no one could hear, she covered her mouth and whispered, “She let me touch her boobies!”

Bonnie asked, “Did she do that thing?”

“What thing?”

“You know, where she touches your missy.”

Jennie blushed as she nodded. “She kissed it!”

Bonnie asked, “Did you stick your hand in hers?!”

“No!” Jennie answered disgustedly.

“So, what did you do?”

“Well, after we got out of the hot tub…”

Bonnie gasped, “She has a hot tub?! I didn’t know that!”

“You didn’t go in it?”

“No. Me and Raven always just go to her bed.”

“It’s really nice. I wanna go in it again.”

“Me first!” Bonnie playfully pouted. “You’ve already been in it.”

“Let’s go in together!”

“Yeah! Let’s do that. This is going to be so much fun.”

Jennie agreed.

*****

That night, a little after nine, Bonnie waited with Raven and Kala in the parking lot, eagerly watching the grove of trees for Jennie. Not knowing what house she was coming from and with no way to contact her, none of them knew for sure if she would even be able to come.

Kala sighed for the third time as she sat down on one of the rocks and turned to Raven, “You don’t have to wait, you know.”

“I know,” Raven replied as she leaned against her bike.

Kala suddenly jumped up, peering at the trees, then slowly and dejectedly sat down again. They continued waiting in silence as the minutes passed by. Raven came over, saying quietly, “Hey… maybe she just couldn’t come…”

“I’m not leaving,” Kala told her firmly.

Raven went back and continued leaning against her bike, her arms around Bonnie. Several more minutes passed, then Kala stood, stared into the trees for a moment, then ran into the grove. Raven and Bonnie looked in the direction she’d run towards, and soon, off in the distance, they were able to see Jennie coming through the trees. They watched as Kala ran up to Jennie, picked her up and hugged her, then came walking back, hand in hand with the girl.

Bonnie ran over to Jennie and hugged her as Raven got on her bike and started it up.

“What happened?!” Bonnie asked.

“I had to wait for my dad to fall asleep.”

“I’m glad you were able to come.”

“Me too,” Jennie said.

Raven helped Bonnie get on her bike with her as Kala set Jennie on hers, and then together they drove back to the house with Bonnie and Jennie smiling and waving at one another as they rode along.

After pulling into the garage and getting off the bikes, Bonnie asked, “Can we go in the hot tub?”

Raven looked at her dubiously. “We?”

“All of us.”

Raven looked at Kala, who looked at Jennie, who was smiling hopefully up at her. Kala asked, “You want to go in the hot tub again?”

Jennie nodded excitedly.

“Okaaay…” Kala snickered. She opened the door to her side of the duplex and they all went in, through the living room and out onto the back patio.

Raven and Kala began to get undressed, and Bonnie joined them, taking her clothes off too. Once they were naked, Raven and Bonnie climbed in, but Kala paused, noticing that Jennie hadn’t moved.

Bonnie poked her head out of the tub, her dark hair slicked back. “Jennie?! Come on!”

Kala knelt down beside the girl. “What is it? Don’t you want to get in?”

Jennie nodded.

Confused, Kala asked, “Then why don’t you…” Kala paused, then said, “Is it because you don’t want them to see you naked?”

Another small nod.

“How ‘bout we go inside, then you can get undressed and keep a towel around you until you get in, okay?”

When Jennie smiled and nodded approvingly, Kala turned to the others, saying, “We’ll be right back.” Then she took Jennie’s hand, “Come on.”

She led Jennie inside to her bedroom. Away from prying eyes, Jennie got undressed as Kala grabbed a towel and wrapped it around the child. Now that she was feeling more comfortable, they went back outside and climbed into the hot tub. As Jennie submerged herself beneath the roiling water, Kala took the wet towel from her and dropped it onto the deck.

Still self-conscious about her nakedness, Jennie tried to keep her body below the water level, but as she and Bonnie began splashing each other, she soon forgot about that and would sometimes stand up, exposing her chest. Raven and Kala leaned back against the sides, watching the girls cavort, while lazily fingering themselves.

Bonnie, smoothing the hair from her eyes, turned to Raven. “Aren’t you going to play?”

“I am,” Raven answered matter-of-factly.

“No, you’re not. You’re just sitting there.”

“Oh, am I?” Raven asked in a teasingly aggressive voice, while slowly sinking below the surface until only her head showed then slowly moved towards Bonnie. Seeing her approach, Bonnie backed away grinning as Raven came closer like a shark, smiling hungrily. Bonnie backed into the sidewall, then quickly romped along it towards Jennie, giggling in her efforts to get away. Raven kept coming as Bonnie laughingly asked for help. “Don’t let her get me, Jennie!”

Uneasy about the way Raven was looking as she came towards her, Jennie quickly went over to Kala, hiding behind her for security while keeping her eyes on Raven. Bonnie climbed up on the bench and peeked over the edge preparing to climb out — but Raven quickly sprang up and grabbed her, crying, “Gotcha!” while Bonnie shrieked with laughter.

Lifting Bonnie up in the air as she squirmed in her efforts to get away, Raven teased, “Such a naughty little girl. I’m going to have to spank you.” Holding her around the waist with her left arm, she lightly swatted Bonnie’s naked bottom.

“Ow! Jennie, help me!” Bonnie cried out, giggling.

Though she knew this was simply a game they were playing, Raven’s aggressiveness made Jennie nervous, causing her to press up ever closer to Kala, as she kept her wary eyes on Raven. Sensing Jennie’s uneasiness, Kala brought the girl into her lap, wrapping her arms around her.

“You don’t want to play?” she asked Jennie, who, still watching the others, shook her head, frowning.

“Now I’m gonna spank you!” Bonnie shouted in defiance as she wildly swung her hand at Raven’s butt, connecting with a loud slap.

Raven looked back at Bonnie’s face in a playfully scornful way as she ran a finger along the child’s butt crack. “Oh, you are? Well, what’s this?” Raven asked as she parted Bonnie’s cheeks and gently probed her wrinkled, brown anus.

“That’s my butt!” Bonnie cried out.

“Oh, it is? Would you like me to poke my finger inside?” Raven asked, gently pushing her fingertip against it.

Bonnie’s butt cheeks clenched as she squealed, “NOOO!” and tried to block her bottom with her hands, but was unable to because of Raven’s arm.

“How about here?” Raven slid her finger down to Bonnie’s sex, then gently pushed inside, “Is this better?”

“Ooh, yeah…” Bonnie breathed out.

Raven sat down, settling Bonnie on her lap as she continued to finger her.

“Oooh, that feels so good,” Bonnie sighed as she grasped Raven’s breasts. Squeezing gently at first, her fingers would often twitch with Raven’s probing, causing her to pinch the hard nipples. Her breathing becoming heavier and more erratic as her hips involuntarily jerked from time to time.

Mesmerized, Jennie quietly asked Kala, “Did I do that with you last night?”

“Yeah.”

As Jennie turned back to watching Bonnie, she soon became aware of Kala softly rubbing her. It felt good, and when Kala’s hand slid down between her legs, she didn’t resist. Her thighs parted, allowing Kala to cup her tender, yielding sex and her middle finger to press upwards inside her.

She felt Kala’s warm breath in her ear. “Do you like this?”

Breathing harder, Jennie’s answer came out in gasps, “Yeah…” It felt incredible, better than anything. Jennie leaned back limply against the woman, still watching Bonnie’s naked body as her friend sat on Raven’s lap.

Suddenly, without warning, Raven glanced up and stared right at Jennie.

Feeling apprehensive, the girl turned to Kala, “She’s looking at me.”

“You don’t want her to?”

“I don’t want her to see me… do that…”

Kala smiled, “Okay.”

Picking Jennie up, she stepped out of the hot tub and carried her inside to the bathroom. Grabbing a fresh towel, Kala dried the shivering nine-year-old girl. “You’re cold.”

Jennie nodded while clasping her arms about her for warmth.

When she’d finished drying her off, Kala led Jennie to the bed, pulling back the blanket to let her crawl underneath. After getting under herself, she pulled the blanket over both of them. Lying on their sides, looking at one another, Kala softly cupped Jennie’s cheek with her hand, “This better?”

“Yeah,” Jennie whispered, smiling.

They cuddled for a minute, then Kala saw a thoughtful look cross Jennie’s face as she stared at her boobs. Kala said, “What is it?”

The little girl asked, “Can I… touch your… um…?”

“My tits?”

Jennie’s face turned red.

“It’s okay,” Kala told her, as she took Jennie’s hand and brought it to her chest.

Jennie’s face brightened as she began gently squeezing Kala’s breast. As she did so, Kala’s fingers lightly grazed over Jennie’s naked body, at times eliciting a giggle at a particularly ticklish spot, before finally coming to the slit between her legs.

Jennie scooted a little closer to Kala, wanting to be as close to her boobies as possible. They were so big… and more than that, they were beautiful. It didn’t make sense, but she found that they had a sort of hold on her, like she was under their spell. She traced her finger around the nipple several times, feeling the texture of the areola and the surrounding skin and pressing down on the firm nipple. Unconsciously, her head slid closer and closer till she felt the nipple touching her upper lip. She pulled back, afraid that Kala might chastise her, but she didn’t.

After a while, Jennie asked, “Did you want me to touch yours?”

“Do you want to?”

Jennie shrugged, but made no reply.

“Did you like it when I touched this?” said Kala, lightly fingering the girl’s slit.

“Yeah,” Jennie grinned.

Kala raised up onto her knees, beside Jennie, offering herself.

Jennie’s eyes bugged out of her head as she stared at Kala’s pussy. “Whoooa…” she whispered. Then she looked up. “But I don’t know what to do.”

“Touch it,” Kala told her as she reached down and ran her finger along Jennie’s sex, giving an example.

Jennie reached out and carefully began to touch. As she moved her finger slowly around the edge, she saw Kala’s clit poking out, and asked, “What’s this?”

“That’s the magic button.”

“Why is it magic?” the child asked, her voice filled with wonder.

“Because that’s what makes you feel really good.”

Jennie looked at it, then asked, “Do I have a magic button?”

Snickering at her cuteness, Kala said, “Yeah, all girls do.”

Jennie sat up, peering down at herself. “Where’s mine?”

Kala leaned over and spread apart the lips of Jennie’s vulva, then poked, “Right here. Feel it?”

“Yeah.”

“Feels good, huh?”

“Yeah.”

Kala sat back on her knees, casually rubbing her own clit. Seeing how Jennie was watching her, she teased, “You wanna kiss it?”

Jennie made a disagreeable face. “Uh-uh. It’ll taste like pee.”

Kala grinned, thinking, God, she is so cute! Reaching over, she tickled Jennie’s sex softly, “Put your fingers inside me and tickle like this.”

Jennie stuck three of her fingers into Kala’s pussy about an inch.

“A little more,” Kala encouraged her.

The girl pushed her fingers deeper inside, exclaiming, “Ooh, it’s all wet. Now what do I do?”

“Tickle it.”

She tried to move her fingers, but they were squeezed too tightly, “I can’t.”

“Just keep doing that.”

“Doing what?”

“Moving your hand like that.”

“Okaaay…” Jennie murmured, not seeing what good it would do.

Kala’s breathing slowed and deepened as she luxuriated in the little twinges of pleasure this was giving her. After a minute, she sighed, “That feels good.”

“It does?” Jennie asked.

“Yeah. Keep doing that.”

Kala reached down and massaged her clit, all the while keeping her eyes on Jennie. Her adorable little face added so much to the pleasure. It was so animated as her hand explored Kala’s pussy in an awkward, clumsy way, as if she was sticking it in a mouse hole, trying to find the mouse that was inside.

“What are you doing?” Jennie asked.

“Playing with the magic button,” Kala smirked. “Keep moving your hand,” she reminded her.

As Jennie watched, Kala began moaning and panting and shuddering, and then suddenly her body tensed up as she groaned very loudly. Jennie’s hand felt wet, and when she pulled it out, she looked at it in disgust, exclaiming, “Eeewww, you peed on me.”

Still breathing heavily, Kala lay down next to the girl, propped up on an elbow with her head beside Jennie’s lap. “It’s not pee. It’s… kinda like water,” she said.

Jennie sniffed her hand. “It smells funny.”

Rolling her eyes, Kala lightly stroked Jennie’s sex. Gently pushing a finger inside, she again saw the bright pink within. Using her thumbs to spread the lips apart, she admired how beautiful and small it was, then leaning over, she kissed it. Keeping her mouth over it, her tongue flicked out to taste the girl’s nectar.

Jennie’s hips squirmed as she laughed, “That tickles!”

Kala smiled and kissed her again, then Jennie asked, “Why do you do that?!”

“Because I like kissing you down here,” the woman smirked.

“Does it taste like pee?”

“Nuh-uh,” Kala mumbled as she continued licking Jennie’s sweetness and casually glided her fingers along the sides of her body, drawing out little moans and sighs from the girl. Soon, she felt Jennie’s hands grabbing her head, trying to pull it into her.

As Kala flicked the tiny clit with her tongue, Jennie’s hips began bucking and with a loud squeal, “EEEEEeeee…” her hips thrust up into Kala’s mouth. Then she collapsed onto the bed, completely spent.

*****

Back in the hot tub, Bonnie was sitting on Raven’s lap facing her, fully absorbed with her boobs. She couldn’t stop squeezing and making them jiggle. “Will mine get this big?” she asked.

“There’s no way to know.”

“I hope they do. I want really big boobs.”

“A lot of people think boobs make the girl. But don’t think that bigger boobs will make you more attractive or more popular. All it’ll do is bring a lot of unwelcome attention.”

“What’s that mean?” Bonnie asked.

“It means a lot of people will like you only for your big boobs and not for yourself.”

Bonnie held Raven’s nipples as she shook the breasts back and forth, then said, “I still wish I had boobs.”

“I like you the way you are,” Raven smiled. “It doesn’t matter if you have boobs or not.”

Her hand reached up and brushed over the top of Bonnie’s head as she stared into her eyes, those same eyes that drew her in three days ago at Leather & Lace. The same ones that were drawing her in now with their twinkling. She leaned forward and kissed her.

Bonnie wasn’t expecting a kiss, but when it happened, she welcomed it. She really liked kissing Raven. It gave her a warm feeling inside.

When Raven finished the kiss, she lifted Bonnie by her armpits up onto the deck that surrounded the tub, so her legs dangled in the warm water. Situating herself between the child’s legs, she slowly pushed her face into Bonnie’s sex and kissed her there. Using her tongue to burrow past the puffy lips, she pushed her tongue in and swirled it around inside as Bonnie watched dumbfounded.

To Bonnie, it was shocking to see, but it felt so good. She leaned back, resting her hands on the deck, and spread her legs farther apart, watching Raven press her mouth against her, kissing and sucking and licking. As the feelings Raven was giving her caused the girl to relax, she lay down all the way and stared up at the night-sky. She felt Raven pushing her legs open still wider then raising her hips, hands under her bottom. Bonnie’s breathing deepened as she grasped the sides of her head from little jolts that seemed to wrack her entire body.

Then, it hit her. The unbelievably intense feeling that totally consumed her. Her limbs contracting unconsciously, a wail suddenly erupted from the girl’s mouth, “UHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUH…”

The woman held her tightly, licking and licking, so long that Bonnie’s muscles ached from the stiffness. As Raven slowly released her, Bonnie kept twitching momentarily until finally she lay still, completely exhausted and gasping for breath.

Raven watched as the girl recovered. No matter how many times she seen Bonnie come, it was always the most amazing thing, completely unlike any other orgasm she had ever witnessed. She softly stroked Bonnie’s cheek as the child lay there panting. Eventually, her breathing slowed and, to Raven’s amazement, a soft snoring came from her.

Laughing quietly so as not to wake her up, Raven shook her head in disbelief, Why does she fall asleep every time?

“And I didn’t even get any,” she muttered under her breath. Not that she minded. Giving Bonnie so much pleasure more than made up for not coming herself.

“Bonnie…” Gently she raised the girl up, eyes still closed. “Bonnie…”

Her eyes blinked open. “Did I fall asleep?”

“Yeah, I need to take you home.”

“Nooo, I want to have sex again,” she begged sleepily. “Lemme stay just a little bit longer, pleaaaase…?”

It’s so hard to say no, Raven thought to herself, then told her, “Okay, but let’s get out and dry off.”

They climbed out of the hot tub and dried off, then went inside Raven’s house. Bonnie ran to the bedroom and jumped onto the bed, scrambling underneath the covers as the woman walked in behind her.

“You certainly are awake now,” Raven smirked.

Bonnie grinned at her from under the blanket, with only her face peeking out. “I can’t help it. I love sex.”

“Me too,” Raven agreed, pulling back the blanket and crawling in beside the girl. She kissed her as she reached over and rolled Bonnie on top of her. As they smiled at one another, Raven’s hands cupped the child’s tiny bottom, squeezing it while Bonnie’s legs fell on either side of Raven’s leg. Raven rocked Bonnie’s hips back and forth along her thigh, causing both of them to moan softly at the little tingles that emanated from the jostling.

“That feels good,” Bonnie said quietly.

“Yeah,” Raven agreed. Bonnie’s upper leg was pressed tight against her pussy while Raven’s hands were pulling Bonnie against it. Raven kept this up, going on relentlessly, rocking the girl on her thigh until the muscles in her arms burned and they were both sweaty and out of breath — but it felt too good to stop.

“Raven?” Bonnie squeaked, nearly breathless.

“Yeah?”

“I can… I can feel it…”

Her voice sounded strained. Raven could feel it too. She gasped, her legs clenching as her hips quivered.

Bonnie’s eyes squeezed tightly shut as she cried out, “Aaaaiiiggghhh…”

Seeing this incredible sight pushed Raven over the edge, “Oh fuck! Oh f-fuck!” Her orgasm burst forth as she ground Bonnie’s leg into her pussy, smearing her girl cum all over it.

Then, as Bonnie collapsed on top of her and her own orgasm passed, Raven’s arms fell to her sides. They were sore, and it felt as if she had run a marathon, but it had been worth it. She was going to sleep good tonight.

Speaking of which, she looked at Bonnie. Her head was resting on her chest and her face was turned away. Raven couldn’t tell if her eyes were closed, but she assumed she was probably asleep again. Not wanting to wake her up just yet, she wrapped her arms around the little girl, softly rubbing her back.

After a minute, Bonnie spoke, “That was great.” Her voice sounded tired, but content.

In a few minutes more, she said, “Raven?”

“Hmmm?”

“Is what we’re doing wrong?” Bonnie raised her head so she was looking at Raven. “Us having sex, I mean? Cuz I really like it.”

Raven stroked Bonnie’s hair. “People think it’s wrong.”

“But why would they?”

“Because they’re afraid I’ll hurt you.”

“But you don’t. And besides, I want to do it,” Bonnie said.

“I know, but people will still think that I’m making you.”

“Well, I’ll just tell them you’re not.”

“If it were only that easy,” Raven chuckled. “I’m afraid you wouldn’t be able to convince anybody, though, and that’s why we need to keep this a secret.”

Raven continued to rub her back and run her fingers through her hair, enjoying the intimate moment.

Bonnie interrupted her thoughts. “What happened to your arm?”

Raven looked to see Bonnie examining the two-inch scar on the underside of her wrist. Raven’s smile faded as she quickly laid her arm down on the bed, hiding the scar.

Bonnie pulled her own leg up and pointed to a scar just above her knee, “I got this falling out of a tree. I had to go to the hospital and get stitches. Did you have to get stitches?”

The woman’s voice was flat. “No. It was nothing. I should take you home now.”

Bonnie groaned, “Awww…”

Raven went to the patio to retrieve their clothes as Bonnie begrudgingly got out of bed. They got dressed and Raven drove her home. As they stood outside Bonnie’s bedroom window, they kissed, and then Raven helped Bonnie climb back inside.

“I’ll see you tomorrow night,” Bonnie told her. “Goodnight.”

“Tomorrow. Goodnight.”

*****

A light snore issued from Jennie as she slept. Kala snuggled beside her, leaning on an elbow, watching her sleep. She couldn’t bear to wake the young girl, almost as if that would be wrong. Something about seeing someone so at peace filled Kala with a contentment she had never known before.

Several minutes later, Jennie’s eyes slowly blinked, then came open. Turning her head, she saw Kala smiling at her. “What happened…?” she asked groggily.

Kala chuckled. She couldn’t help it.

Jennie looked at her confusedly. “What’s so funny?”

“You. I think I need to take you back home now. I’ll get your clothes.” Kala got out of the bed and handed Jennie her things, then got dressed herself.

After pulling on her clothes, Jennie asked, “Can I have something to drink?”

Kala, checking her phone, said, “Sure. There’s some milk in the fridge. Help yourself.”

Jennie walked out to the kitchen and opened the refrigerator. Taking out the jug of milk, she set it on the table and looked around for a cup. Not seeing any, she reached up and opened one of the cabinet doors. There, she saw some small glasses, and standing on her tip-toes, managed to grab one. Bringing it over, she awkwardly picked up the heavy jug of milk with both hands and tried to pour it into the glass.

The milk suddenly surged forth, sloshing into the glass and knocking it off the table. It fell, splashing and shattering on the floor below. The suddenness and noise startled Jennie, causing the jug to slip from her fingers. It bounced off the edge of the table and also fell on the floor, spilling out milk into a great, white puddle.

Her eyes wide with fright, Jennie began trembling with fear as she slowly backed away until she was cringing against the stove with Kala’s voice calling out, “Jennie — what happened?”

Kala stepped to her bedroom door and looked towards the kitchen. “Jennie…?”

Not hearing any answer, she walked into the kitchen. There, she saw the spilt milk, the broken glass, and Jennie cowering in the corner, with terror written all over her face. Kala quickly strode over and took the girl in her arms, holding her close.

Jennie’s quaking voice whispered, “I’m sorry… I’m sorry… I’m sorry…”

Rubbing her back, Kala reassured her, “Shhh… it’s okay… I’m not mad.”

Kala got up and slowly walked into the living room, carrying the child, not clear why she was so alarmed. Kala looked at the tears welling up in Jennie’s eyes. Then she realized: it wasn’t just alarm on Jennie’s face, it was fear. Kala whispered tenderly, “Hey… you didn’t do anything wrong, okay?”

Jennie nodded sadly and Kala sat down with her on the couch, petting and soothing.

A minute later, she returned to the kitchen, picked up the half-empty jug and poured a glass of milk, which she took to Jennie. As she was cleaning up the milk and the broken pieces of glass, Kala wondered how someone could be so terrified over simply breaking a glass and spilling some milk.

When they were both ready to go, Kala drove Jennie back to the parking lot. After stopping the bike, Kala set the girl down, then got off. Jennie seemed to be alright, but still slightly sad.

“Jennie?” Kala said. “Let me walk you home, okay? I really don’t like you walking by yourself.”

“It’s not far.”

Kala took her hand and started walking towards the grove of trees. “But I want—”

“No, don’t!” Jennie cried out, agitated.

Stunned, Kala looked at her for a few seconds. “Well, okay… as long as it’s not far.”

Then she knelt down and kissed the girl, saying, “I had a lot of fun. I really like being with you. And please don’t worry about spilling that milk. It was just an accident.”

“Okay,” Jennie said quietly.

“Can you come over again tomorrow night?”

“I’ll try.”

“I’ll be here waiting.”

Kissing her once more, Kala stood up.

Jennie’s shoulders sank as turned and walked off into the trees, soon disappearing from view. Kala stared after her for several seconds, then went back home.

*****

KNOCK – KNOCK – KNOCK

Raven opened the door, then walked back through the kitchen to the living room, asking, “How was Jennie?”

Kala followed her in. “Fucking incredible.”

Raven sat in the recliner and took a sip of the beer she’d been drinking, “Told ya.”

After getting a beer from the fridge, Kala plopped down on the couch. “Jinx called earlier today. Said she hadn’t seen you at the club the last few nights.”

Raven shrugged, shaking her head. “I used to go there every night. Pick up curious college chicks, horny moms on business trips, you know…”

She took another sip of her beer and paused for a bit. “Now, all I want is Bonnie.” She looked at Kala, “She’s sorta like a drug. I mean, all I do is think about her. No one else, just her.”

“Same with me,” Kala agreed.

They were both quiet for a while, then Kala said, “There’s something odd about Jennie, though. It’s like… she’s scared of something.”

“She’s nine. Nine-year-olds are scared of everything.”

“No, it’s… something more. I don’t know what.”

Continue on to Chapter 5

 

No comments on Ultimate Surrender, Chapter 4

  1. Matthew says:

    All around nicely done.

  2. Jennifer says:

    Jennie is an abused child. So sad to read but it takes the story to a whole new level, I can’t wait to read the next part of it! *thumbsup*

  3. revelnit says:

    I look forward to seeing what other surprises the girls have for Raven and Kala. Thanks for the chapter and so quick too!

  4. Purple Les says:

    fantastic chapter.

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