Ultimate Surrender, Chapter 2

  • Posted on April 10, 2017 at 12:30 pm

By Girl Lover

“Sweetheart… time to get up…”

Bonnie yawned, stretching her arms out wide, and looked up at the ceiling as the sunlight filtered in through the curtains. It was Tuesday morning.

Her mom left the room as Bonnie continued to lay in bed. She was so tired, and wished she could sleep for a few more hours. Why was she so sleepy this morning? She was never this tired when she woke up… RAVEN! Her eyes snapped open as the events of the night before suddenly came back to her. The sneaking out. The wrestling. The motorcycle ride. The sex.

Bonnie silently breathed out, “Wooow…” Last night was so amazing, more than she’d ever hoped for. Could it all have been just a dream?

Her mom walked by again. “Bonnie, get up! You’re going to be late for school!”

Groaning, Bonnie threw back the covers and got out of bed, then went over to her pile of clothes to pick up her jeans. Slipping her hand inside a pocket, she felt the piece of paper and pulled it out. Seeing Raven’s phone number convinced her how real it was.

Taking the note over to her desk, she pulled open a drawer and placed it way in the back, out of sight, so her mom wouldn’t find it. Then she got dressed and ate breakfast before her mother drove her to school. On the way there, she was pleasantly surprised to see that her school was not very far from Raven’s house.

In the classroom, as Bonnie sat across from Jennie in their group, Jennie whispered excitedly, “Well, what happened?!”

Not wanting anyone else to hear, Bonnie whispered back, “Not now! At lunch, okay?”

When lunch finally came and they were sitting at the end of the table away from the other kids, Jennie couldn’t hold back any longer. “Would you puleeeeease tell me what happened?!”

Leaning close, Bonnie told her, “It’s true! The lesbians! The naked women wrestling! All true! I could see their boobs and butts and everything!”

Jennie gasped, “You actually saw them naked?!” Then a suspicious look crossed her face. “Wait a minute. How did you get in?”

Bonnie glanced over at the other girls sitting apart from them and saw that they weren’t paying them any attention. She looked back at Jennie. “A woman let me in.”

Jennie’s eyebrows raised in surprise.

“Her name is Raven.”

“What kind of name is that?” Jennie asked, face wrinkled in confusion.

Bonnie shrugged her shoulders, “I dunno. Something about her motorcycle.”

“She rides a motorcycle?!” Jennie exclaimed in surprise.

“Yeah!”

Bonnie told her everything: the wrestling, going to Raven’s house, and the sex. As Jennie listened, her eyes kept getting bigger until finally her hands flew up to her mouth and she burst out, “OhmyGod! You’re kidding!”

Bonnie shook her head, grinning.

Jennie repeated, “You’ve got to be kidding!”

Giggling at Jennie’s comical appearance, Bonnie assured her, “I’m not!”

With her mouth wide open, Jennie blurted, a little too loudly, “You touched her everywhere?!”

“SSHHH!” Bonnie hissed. “Ya wanna tell everybody?!”

Jennie closed her mouth in sudden surprise, then asked, “Everywhere?!”

“Yep,” Bonnie nodded proudly, then whispered, “Her boobies are really soft.”

Jennie giggled wildly, “I can’t believe you did that!”

Bonnie continued, “And I put my hand inside her missy!”

“OHMYGOD!” Jennie’s hands flew up to her mouth again.

“SSHHH!!” Bonnie hissed at her again. “And when she touched mine… it was incredible! It made me feel so good! It’s like… like…”

“Like what?!” Jennie interrupted.

“I dunno. It’s hard to describe. It’s kinda like when you have a bad itch and you scratch it and it feels so good to scratch it.” Bonnie smirked at her, “Why dontcha come with me tonight?”

A nervous look crossed Jennie’s face. She shook her head, “Uh-uh.”

“Why not?” Bonnie frowned.

“You said she looked scary…”

“Only at first!”

“And that the lesbian bar was scary too… no way!”

“She’s really nice. Tell you what. I’ll ask her if she knows someone nice who can have sex with you.” Bonnie grinned at that last part.

Jennie’s face became horrified, “Don’t you dare!”

Bonnie covered her mouth while she giggled at Jennie’s reaction, then said, “I’m just kidding, but seriously, I think you’ll really love it. I mean, it felt so good. It was the most awesome thing in the world!”

Seeing the sincerity in Bonnie’s face, Jennie began to contemplate it, but said, “I can’t. Not tonight anyways.”

Disappointed, Bonnie said, “Okay. But I’m going to call Raven tonight.”

Jennie gasped, “What are you going to ask her?”

Bonnie’s eyes sparkled, “If she wants to have sex again.”

*****

Later that day, after school, Bonnie couldn’t sit still. It took her three times as long to finish her homework than it should have, and afterwards she kept looking at the clock and was so distracted that her mother felt her forehead to see if she was sick. Nothing seemed to hold her interest. She just stared blankly at the TV while watching the minutes crawl by. Seven o’clock came. Then eight o’clock. Finally nine o’clock.

She went to bed without being told, and after her parents wished her goodnight and went to their room, she waited several minutes for them to fall asleep. Then she got out of bed and began to rearrange it with the pillows and the wig. When she was satisfied with how it looked, she grabbed her phone and the note with Raven’s number on it.

After punching in the number, it rang three times, and then she heard Raven. “Hello?”

For a second, Bonnie had stage fright and couldn’t talk, but then managed to quietly say, “Hi, uh, Raven? It’s me, Bonnie.”

“Hey!” she heard the woman’ upbeat voice. Raven sounded as excited as Bonnie was. “I didn’t know if you would call. I’m glad you did!”

There was a pause, then Raven asked, “Did you want me to come pick you up?”

“Yeah,” Bonnie answered, then suddenly added, “But not at my house. At the theater parking lot where the big rocks are, by the road.”

“Okay, see you soon!”

The phone hung up.

Carefully, quietly, Bonnie opened her bedroom window and crawled outside. After closing the window again, she ran to the street, then down to the corner. When she felt that she was far enough from her house, she slowed to a walk and in a few minutes reached the theater parking lot. Sitting down on one of the rocks, she waited for Raven. It felt so strange to be alone in the theater’s parking lot so late at night. She eagerly watched for Raven’s bike and was disappointed every time approaching lights turned out to be a car instead.

Then a single headlight came zooming quickly down the road towards her. Bonnie jumped to her feet as Raven swerved into the parking lot and drove up. Looking just as imposing as she had the previous night, Bonnie couldn’t help being both impressed and intimidated by Raven as her big black Yamaha came rumbling to a stop.

Bonnie swallowed, then stepped closer. Raven smiled as she asked, “So, what do you want to do?”

Grinning sheepishly, Bonnie said, “Can we go to your house?”

Raven stifled a laugh at the child’s cuteness, “Yeah.”

She scooted back on the seat and pointed to the foot peg. “Put your foot here.” Bonnie did, and with Raven’s help, lifted her leg up over the seat and sat down.

With Bonnie in front of her holding on to the gas tank, Raven slowly guided the motorcycle out of the parking lot and onto the street again. As before, Bonnie felt the wind on her face as she experienced the thrill of flying along the road. She was more used to it this time, and it was so much better than the dead humdrum of being in a car. After a few minutes, they pulled onto Raven’s driveway and then into the garage as the door opened for them.

After setting Bonnie down, Raven got off and closed the garage door. She opened the door to the house and they went inside. Raven asked, “Do you want anything to eat?”

“No, thank you.”

So polite, Raven thought to herself as she led the way to the bedroom. As she walked in, she took her jacket off, dropping it on the floor. Upon reaching the bed, she turned around and sat on the edge, facing Bonnie, who stood a few feet away.

“So, you want to do stuff?” Raven softly asked.

Bonnie smiled shyly and nodded. Chuckling, Raven pulled her boots off, then pulled her tank top over her head, uncovering her braless breasts, and after unbuttoning her jeans, pushed them down and off her legs.

Noticing that Bonnie still hadn’t moved, she motioned to her. Bonnie walked over till she was standing before Raven, openly gawking at her chest. Seeing this, Raven twisted side to side, causing her breasts to sway back and forth.

“Whooaa…” Bonnie exclaimed, obviously impressed and unaware of her reaction until Raven snickered, causing the girl to blush.

“Just like last night. Anything you want,” Raven encouraged her. “Anything.”

Bonnie grinned as she grasped the woman’s boobs, one in each hand. As she gently squeezed, feeling how soft they were, Raven surprised her by saying, “Try kissing it.”

“Really?”

“Uh-huh.”

“Okay.”

Bonnie leaned down and gave a quick peck to the left breast, then raised back up and looked at Raven.

Doing a full eye-roll, Raven sighed and told her, “Kiss it again, but do it slowly. Here, let me show you how.”

Raven took the hem of Bonnie’s shirt and pulled it up until her nipples were exposed, then leaned close and placed her mouth over Bonnie’s flat nipple and held it there, licking with her tongue.

“That tickles!” Bonnie giggled.

Raven sat back up. “Now lick my nipple like that.”

Bonnie bent down and kissed the breast again, but this time kept her mouth on it and swirled her tongue back and forth over the nipple as she looked up at Raven.

“Suck it like a straw,” the woman said.

As Bonnie took the erect nipple into her mouth and began sucking, Raven sighed, “Yeah… just like that,” bringing her hand up to gently stroke the top of Bonnie’s head.

After a minute or so, Raven lay down on the bed and scooted back. Bonnie crawled eagerly onto the bed, noticing how Raven’s breasts protruded upwards like mounds. She grasped them again and couldn’t get over how soft they were. She squeezed and pulled on the nipples, then looked at Raven, lying naked before her, and wondered what she should do next.

Raven propped her hands behind her head as she saw the girl glancing down at her pussy. Bonnie seemed to hesitate, but then crawled closer and lay down so her face was within inches of Raven’s crotch. She placed her hand on the mound, feeling the soft hair, then began poking around curiously with one finger.

“It’s all gooey in here,” Bonnie suddenly exclaimed.

Laughing to herself, Raven told her, “That’s because you’re making me feel good.”

“I am?” Bonnie asked in surprise, her finger going deeper, continuing to explore the moist warmth.

“Ohhh yeeaaah…”

Raven sighed as she watched the child, just as amazed as Bonnie was. If it was some other woman doing this, it would have been completely different, not nearly as tantalizing. She’d been with a few inexperienced college girls who were curious about lesbians, but never before had she had one like this. Bonnie didn’t even know what sex was — and it was that naive innocence that drew Raven in and held her, making her want to show Bonnie all the wonders that it beheld.

“This feels good?” Bonnie asked, two fingers now sliding in and out.

“Uh-huh. Remember how good it felt when I did it to you?”

“Oh, yeeaah…” Bonnie’s eyes widened as she remembered last night. Her small fingers kept pushing deeper until a third one slipped inside, then a fourth.

“Oh fuck…” Raven groaned as her thighs contracted, squeezing down on Bonnie’s arm. This was just too good. She felt a climax slowly building, growing stronger with each thrust of the girl’s hand inside her.

Then to her surprise, she felt Bonnie’s hand twisting around so that her palm was upwards, her fingers tickling the roof of her vagina. Raven sucked in her breath as her arms reached out and balled the sheet in her fists. Clenching her teeth as the orgasm peaked so she wouldn’t cry out too loudly and scare Bonnie, she exhaled with a groan, then faintly heard the girl exclaim, “Oh gross!”

Panting heavily, Raven breathed out, “Oh, fuck… that felt so good.”

Bonnie’s voice again came to her ears, “You peed all over my hand and the bed!”

Chuckling quietly, Raven waited several more seconds to catch her breath, then sat up. Bonnie had pulled her hand out and was staring at it as it glistened and dripped on the bed.

“You peed on me again,” the child repeated as she gazed, mesmerized, at the thin strands of wetness that hung stretched between her fingers.

Raven looked at her arm and the wet spot on the bed, “It’s not pee. Remember what I told you last night?”

Bonnie raised her head up, her mouth forming an O of understanding, “Oh, yeaaah…” then looked back at her hand, “It sure looks like pee.”

Raven snickered, “You’re so cute.”

Pursing her lips, Bonnie seemed as if she wanted to ask something. Finally she said, “Can you… do that sex thing to me… that you did last night?”

Fuck, is she cute! Raven thought to herself as she smiled and nodded.

“Lift up your arms,” she said, and as Bonnie did, pulled off her shirt.

“Here, lay down on the bed,” she instructed and after Bonnie did that, Raven slowly unbuttoned her jeans while watching the girl’s face for any sign of hesitation. Slowly pulling the jeans down, she stifled a laugh at Bonnie’s adorable Disney Princess panties, then slid them off too.

Raven’s breathing momentarily stopped as she stared transfixed at the beautiful sight lying naked before her. She laid a finger on the child’s bare chest and slowly traced down, making Bonnie giggle and squirm as the finger drew across her belly.

Getting onto her hands and knees, Raven straddled over Bonnie, then leaned down to lightly press her lips against the girl’s. Peeking to see if Bonnie’s eyes were open, she saw that they were and when Bonnie saw Raven looking at her, she began giggling again, causing Raven to laugh too. Raven was about to tell her to close her eyes, but then decided if Bonnie wanted to watch them kiss, then that was fine.

She kissed Bonnie’s mouth again, a little longer this time, then kissed her way down Bonnie’s chest, giving each nipple a few soft kisses before moving down her belly. Raven stretched out on the bed between Bonnie’s legs and looked up into her eyes.

As they gazed at one another, Raven kissed the child’s smooth pussy. Bonnie’s eyes widened in surprise as Raven held her lips to it, and as she felt Raven’s tongue tickling along her slit, and then inside.

“What are you doing??!!” Bonnie squealed in shock.

Pulling away for a second, Raven told her, “Just relax and enjoy it.” Then she pressed her mouth up against Bonnie’s sex again.

Raven’s hands glided warmly along her sides and chest as Bonnie continued to watch. After a few minutes, Raven’s licking began to feel really good. Bonnie’s breathing deepened and she collapsed back against the bed. OhmyGod, this is so amazing! she thought.

Raven, still licking her, watched Bonnie as she began breathing harder and then panting as if she were running. When her hips began to tremble, Raven felt astonished at this transformation from a quiet, shy, little girl only ten minutes earlier to a horny, quivering mess.

She pulled back for a moment and looked at her vulva. Using her thumbs to hold the lips open, she searched for her clit and was amazed to see how tiny it was. She pressed her tongue against it and began rubbing back and forth.

Bonnie moaned as her legs pushed down, lifting her pussy up against Raven’s mouth, “Ohhh… mmMMMMmmohhh… that… that… GAAA!!” she suddenly cried out, then, “NNNNNGGGGGHHHHHHHHhhh……”

Raven couldn’t tear her eyes away from the wondrous reaction on Bonnie’s face. An intense, almost painful look, with her mouth open wide and her eyes squeezed tightly shut.

After several seconds, Bonnie began to relax and to Raven’s surprise, appeared to fall asleep. Raven raised up and looked at her in amazement, then crawled up to lay beside her, lightly caressing her belly as she continued to breathe heavily. What is it about little girls coming so hard that they pass out?

Lying close beside her, Raven carefully draped her arm across Bonnie’s chest and slowly stroked her hair, deep in thought. She really liked this little girl, much more then the usual one-night stands she engaged in. Then she sighed regretfully. As much as she wanted to just remain lying there holding her all night long, she had to take Bonnie home again.

Raven gently shook her, “Bonnie… Bonnie…”

Bonnie’s eyes opened and she turned her head toward the woman, “Did I fall asleep?”

“Uh-huh. Did you like that?”

Bonnie’s eyes lit up as she suddenly came awake. “Oh my God! It just… ohmyGod!! It was like this thing and… and…”

Raven laughed, “I know,” as she sat up and gathered Bonnie’s clothing. “Here’s your stuff. I need to take you back home.”

Bonnie pulled her clothes on as Raven also proceeded to get dressed. But as Bonnie finished and started to crawl off the bed, it seemed to her like she was forgetting something — Jennie!

“Raven…?”

Raven looked down at her, smiling as she pulled her tank top over her head.

Bonnie paused, wondering how to put such a strange request, then continued, “Um, there’s this girl at my school, Jennie. She’s real nice, but she’s shy and I’m her only friend cuz the other girls don’t talk to her cuz they think she’s weird and so I told her all about you and I was wondering if—”

Raven stopped smiling. “You told her what we did?”

“Well, yeah. She’s my best friend.”

Raven’s face became alarmed. “Bonnie… you can’t ever tell anyone what we do.”

Bonnie looked puzzled at first, then said, “You mean about us having sex?”

“Yes. I could get in a lot of trouble.”

“I haven’t told anyone except Jennie and that’s only because she’s my best friend, and that’s what I wanted to ask you about.”

Now Raven was confused. “Ask me about what?”

Bonnie smiled shyly, “Wellll… since me and you have sex and I really like it, I was wonn-derr-ing if you knew someone that could have sex with Jennie.”

Raven squinted questioningly, “You want me to find someone to have sex with your friend… Jennie, is it?”

Bonnie smiled shyly and nodded, “Yeah. I mean I really like it, and so I know she will too.”

Raven chuckled as she sat down on the bed, “Oh fuck.” She glanced over at Bonnie, paused, then replied with a smile, “I might know someone.”

Bonnie gasped happily, “Oh, you do?! That would be so awesome! Jennie’s so nice, but she’s shy and sometimes she’s clumsy and she falls down and gets hurt and she gets scared easy so make sure that whoever you get won’t scare her or make fun of her. Sometimes at school she doesn’t have an umbrella when it rains so I share mine with her and lots of times she forgets to bring her lunch and so I let her have part of mine and…”

Raven closed her eyes, snickering to herself. The marvelous wonder of little girls. “Okay, okay. I gotta get you home now.”

She stood up. “Does this Jennie know what you’re asking?”

“Uh-huh. She didn’t really want to at first, because when I told her what you looked like, she thought you sounded scary, but I told her you were really nice. So you need to get someone just as nice as you, and —”

“All right, all right,” Raven chuckled. “Let’s go.”

She took the girl’s hand and led her out of the house and into the garage. After setting Bonnie on the motorcycle, Raven climbed on behind her and started it up.

Several minutes later, Raven slowed down and stopped at the top of Bonnie’s street, parking the bike. She lifted Bonnie off, and they headed toward her house.

As they walked, Raven watched Bonnie amusingly as she chattered on and on nonstop, “…and I know Jennie will love sex just as much as I do. Is she nice?”

While Raven pondered the question, Bonnie continued without waiting, “Cuz Jennie gets really scared sometimes and…”

Any other time, this constant chatter would have irritated Raven, but with Bonnie, it was endearing.

As they approached the house, Bonnie stopped talking, and they continued on in silence until they reached her bedroom window. Bonnie turned to face Raven. The tall woman crouched down and they stared at one another for a few seconds, then Raven slowly leaned in and kissed her.

“Good night,” said Raven.

“Good night,” Bonnie replied, “I’ll call you tomorrow night and bring Jennie with me. You really know someone who will be nice to her?”

“Yeah.” Raven gave the girl one last kiss, then lifted her up through her window.

*****

As Raven pulled into the garage, she saw a black Honda CBR 600 inside. After parking her bike next to it, instead of going into her half of the duplex, she went to a door on the opposite side of the garage and knocked. Several seconds later, the door opened to reveal a woman with a mohawk who turned around and walked back in.

“What’s up?” the woman asked, as Raven stopped to grab a beer from the fridge before going into the living room and plopping down on a worn recliner.

“I met a girl at the club last night.”

The other woman, still in the kitchen, asked, “What’s she like?”

“Incredible!”

“Fuck her yet?”

Raven thought for a second. “Yes and no. We don’t fuck. We… it’s kinda hard to describe. I… just lay there and let her play with me.”

The woman came out of the kitchen and looked at Raven incredulously. “What?!”

“I’m gentle with her.”

The woman laughed and walked out of sight into the bedroom. “Gentle?! What’s wrong with her?! Is she crippled or something?”

Raven took another swig of her beer. After a deep breath, she said, “Kala. She’s nine.”

From the bedroom, Kala asked, “Nine what?”

“Nine years old.”

There were a few seconds of silence, then Kala stepped out of the bedroom and looked hard at Raven, her eyes narrowing in stunned surprise. “Nine years old? You mean a kid? You’re fucking a kid?!”

Raven nodded in disbelief.

“Why would you do that?!”

“It’s not like I planned it, Kala. It just happened.”

Kala stomped back into the bedroom, asking angrily, “How did having sex with a kid just happen?!”

“Her name’s Bonnie. She was outside the club and wanted to go inside. So I took her in with me. After I was done wrestling, she was staring at my tits and… there was something irresistible about her. So, I brought her here and…”

Kala came back out. “And you fucked her.”

“Nooo, I took off my clothes and let her play with me. It’s different than fucking. She wanted to do it.”

Kala stared at Raven.

“I really like her,” Raven insisted.

Kala went to the kitchen and opened the fridge. “I just don’t see how you can be attracted to a kid. They don’t have anything.”

“That’s what makes her so irresistible. It’s because she doesn’t know what to do that makes her so fucking cute.”

“Sounds more annoying than cute,” Kala’s voice came from behind the refrigerator door.

Raven shrugged, “You never know who you’re going to be attracted to. It just happens.”

Kala pulled out a plate of food and put it inside the microwave. Raven watched for a moment as she pressed the buttons on the microwave, then said, “She has a friend.”

As the microwave began humming, Kala slowly walked back into the living room. “What about it?”

Raven took another sip of her beer. “She has a friend that she wants hooked up.”

Kala narrowed her eyes at Raven. “And you’re thinking I’m going to be the one that her friend hooks up with?”

“She asked me to find someone nice for her.”

Kala walked over to Raven, looking down at her, clearly displeased, “What am I supposed to do with a fucking kid?!”

“Show her what to do.”

Raising her voice, Kala said, “I’m not babysitting some kid who probably isn’t even potty-trained!”

Raven stood up. “Hey… I wasn’t looking for a kid either when I went to the club last night. It just happened. She’s different. She’s not caught up in a bunch of bullshit and doesn’t have any baggage.”

“And you think her friend is going to charm me like this girl did you?!”

Raven went into the kitchen. “You never know.” Seeing that the microwave was done, she opened the door and took the plate of food out.

Kala came over and snatched it out of her hands, scowling, “Why would I be attracted to some kid with no body and doesn’t know what the fuck they’re doing?! I’m not gentle and I’m not going to fucking lay there when I want to fuck!”

Raven leaned back against the sink. “She’s the first girl that I’ve wanted to do more with than just fuck. Look, Bonnie’s gonna call me after nine tomorrow night, then you’ll meet her friend, Jennie, at the Highland 10 Theater parking lot.”

As she thought back to Bonnie, Raven got a faraway look in her eyes. “She has this look… and fuck, she’s so cute. I really like her.”

She turned to Kala, “And I think you’ll like her friend too.”

Kala muttered, “I doubt it.”

Continue on to Chapter 3

 

No comments on Ultimate Surrender, Chapter 2

  1. kim says:

    wow very hot, but is Kala the right match for Jen? I know, I have to wait to find out, and am really looking forward to it.

  2. JetBoy says:

    I’m REALLY digging this story. Convincing characters, a compelling plot — and oh, yeah, it’s hotter than a ghost pepper. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

    • Girl Lover says:

      Thanks Jetboy. As I write, I visualize the scene and characters in my head so I can see what’s happening and hear what they’re saying.

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